The Untouched - Part Five

[miyahearts]

Title:  The Untouched - Part Five
Pairing:  Nichkhun/Wooyoung
Rating:  NC-17
Summary:  Nichkhun, Taecyeon, Junho and Chansung are soldiers trapped in a heinous world war against the evil Dragon King and the Dragon Army.  They have just lost a major battle and have retreated to a hideout only to be rescued and aided by a young, innocent boy from the

Comments

[sonesful]

OMG WHAT HAPPENED TO WOO?!

Dont tell it was just because Khun nailed him too hard... maybe his cherry just popped? ... yeah... I think like that...

But I'm happy somethings starting to happen though :D

BTW all that smut was HOT I love the bathtub bit the most ^^

Can't wait for the next chapter!

[naturedichotomy]

KJFADHGKJDF \o/

I haven't commented on this story yet, have I? >> <<
/been stalking silently I guess.

I think I may love this story even more than the last one, though :| it's a cool concept and the KhunYoung and the TaecSu and the ChanHo and the loveliness ;; and Su's "overt sexuality" and him being young and silly makes me happy, and the way that he was the one pursuing Taec, 'cause I imagine him being that way and I don't often read him written that way~~ :3

[ishmahri]

;A;
Y-Yah!
Woo!
What's with woo?!
How can you do that to me? XD haha
make me spazz and then throw a pailful of cold water into my face hahaha xD
omg the taecsu was freaking adorable ^-^ <3 <3 <3
i totally loved it
and chanho too
and OMG THE KHUNYOUNG XDDD
hahahaha
awesomeness <3

[khunyoungyes]

O Ma gawd my youngie..
wht happen to him?

[pq89]

waaaa khunyoung hot hot hot as always
his cuteness is sth khun can resist!! i swear^^

"yet his humor was his greatest asset, I hadn’t laughed in so long and yet it seemed so easy for him, I needed to learn how to laugh again" oh teac ...ttl agree with ya his smile ^^charming
that smut woooooo all i can say ...hot
junsu ya.. ><"

chanho ---cute as always,,with their love n care

what???? my woo!
whats wrong?