[fic] Lessons in Attention Getting - Edward/Bella (Twilight)

[miyabita13]

[title] Lessons in Attention Getting
[author] miyabita13
[fandom] Twilight
[pairing] Edward/Bella
[rating] PG
[written for] 30_kisses (theme #1 - look over here)
[disclaimer] Twilight and all of its characters belong to Stephenie Meyer, not me. I'm just a poor college student.
[notes] My first jump into the Twilight fandom. Comments are most definitely welcome.

Comments

[pretty_hale]

lol that was hilarious, and really cute.
i loved it. <3
kudos man!

[idreamofdraco]

This was so good! I think you captured Edward perfectly! Especially compared to the partial draft of Midnight Sun, these were definitely Edward's thoughts and voice. So cute!

[jennlynnfs]

LOL! This would sound like how Edward would handle the situation, agonizing over it. Then to have it turn out like this is totally believable.

That was very cute and entertaining!

[subtlynice]

So cute. I miss the good old days of Edward and Bella ignoring each other in biology. :)

[seasidewaltz]

Aww I love this!