Comments | miximel: Um.

miximel

Um.

Jul 13, 2009 19:50

so yeah. I'm not really a fic writer, I just sometimes shoot fic out. idk what this is. It started as a drabble and then became this thing and idek what or how or. just. I wrote it in like 4 hours, but it kind of wrote itself because I didn't have much of a plot going into it, lol. so yeah. 8Dv

The Starting Line
JongKey
PG-13

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jongkey, jongkey = otp, fanfic

Comments 89

ontokki July 14 2009, 03:08:44 UTC

SPOT FOREVER

♥ ontokki July 14 2009, 03:27:41 UTC

OMG MELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL.
TWITTER DOES NOT GIVE ME ENOUGH SPACE TO SPAZZ 8(
DLFDASFSA THIS MADE ME FEEL SO MUCH BETTER. IDEK OMG.
I always imagined that Jongkey holding hands came naturally, just like what you wrote. It's something that just happened♥
omgomg I love how Key got mad when Onew used Jjong.
And how they kiss, omg ;A: so perfect, so sweet, so Jongkey.
This is like the story of Jongkey basically. (minus all the sex they have) This is why I love Jongkey.

/mems

Re: ♥ ontokki July 14 2009, 03:29:25 UTC

oh yea, plz write more fics when you have time 8D

Re: ♥ miximel July 14 2009, 03:40:52 UTC

omfggg thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it! You know I love your jongkey and so the fact that you like it makes me so happy~ ;_; And yes, this is totally how I imagine them, just so perfect and right and ugh. ♥ YOUR COMMENT MADE ME BURST WITH HAPPY FEELINGS. and sdlfkj I'll try to write more~ of course it'll be jongkey though, because that's all I'm inspired by, lol. :'D

♥!

xxarnxx July 14 2009, 03:19:03 UTC

spot 8D

xxarnxx July 14 2009, 03:44:34 UTC

/SNIFF SNIFF GODDAMN SNIFF ;A;

this was beautiful :'D
omg ilu and this fic.

Jonghyun leaned in and kissed Kibum, slowly at first, losing himself when a warm tongue suddenly pushed past his lips and slipped into his mouth. He groaned, pulling Kibum closer and feeling a warm jolt in his stomach when the other boy moaned something that sounded a bit like “Jjong” into his mouth.

wow, my mind is now living in the gutter D:
hurr hurr.

Just everything was just. MWAH. master piece.

WRITE MORE. T_T
GIVE ME JONGHO. ♥

miximel July 14 2009, 03:51:26 UTC

OMG. ♥ you. you! you're too sweet. Thank you so much~ and ffff ilu2! :'DDD

aksjdkj I'm so glad you liked it. ♥

LOL. :3 YOU GIVE ME JONGKEY SMUT. XD your awesome jongho fic made me crave it alskjdfg

xxarnxx July 14 2009, 04:00:01 UTC

lol, sounds fair enough.
give me a prompt/kink/or smth.

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loveisasia July 14 2009, 03:21:24 UTC

IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL MEL. I REALLY LIKED IT. T___T <3

miximel July 14 2009, 03:41:40 UTC

THANK YOU BB. ;___; ♥ I'm so glad you liked it!! I didn't even know you liked JongKey~ :o

loveisasia July 14 2009, 03:44:35 UTC

I SHIP ALMOST EVERYTHIIING XD :D JongKey is really sweet. I love seeing them hold hands.

miximel July 14 2009, 03:53:49 UTC

LOL :D That's good! I'm becoming an everything-shipper myself, with jongho and minkey growing on me really fast because nobody can resist the minwhore. :3

sugarwarrior July 14 2009, 03:24:02 UTC

I'm on an iTouch but whatever. SPOT UNTIL I CAN ACCESS A NOTEPAD TO ABUSE WHILE READING IT AT THE SAME TIME.

miximel July 14 2009, 04:28:06 UTC

LOL ♥ you'd better be back, peepee 8D

sugarwarrior July 14 2009, 17:54:12 UTC

That name will be the end of me, I swear OTL

LMFAO. Key bought all 6 toothbrushes so Jjong can use later? .-. His impatience is so Key, so diva |DDDDDD

The whole It might have been the first time... is so sweet ;~; ♥

Jonghyun was sure that if he had a brother, he’d hold his hand just like this. He’d get a warm feeling in his stomach because this was his brother, right? And he loved him. So it was normal.

That feeling was normal.

He was normal. They were normal.
THIS DENIAL THING IS SO HILARIOUSLY SAD LOL 유________유

“And apologize to Jinki. He’s not used to your bitchfits yet.”
LOL I cry for Onew.

“Well, with the first part you can tell it’s a guy sad about leaving his girl behind, but then the chorus is about the meaning behind a kiss. It makes no sense. You’re kind of a shitty writer, has anyone told you that?”
I want Key to bitch-talk more in rl and not be the quiet little flabbergasted boy he is D:

ldskfjask;ldjf I want to quote the whole kissing scene ;~~~~~~~~~~~; Key's vulnerability and flinching is so sad DDDD;

It ( ... )

sugarwarrior July 14 2009, 17:55:12 UTC

I FAIL AT HTML AND LIFE. The whole thing is italicized 유____________________________________유 *runs away to the dark corner of earth and bawls eyes out*

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phasera July 14 2009, 03:32:03 UTC

ohmigod this was amazing. perfect. fantastic.

“I’m rolling my eyes at you just so you know.”

lol, favorite line, i can so easily imagine Key saying that.

and fffffffffffffff. if you're not a fic-writer, then i'm the queen of sheba. O_o lol, it doesn't take being prolific to be a writer. (but, yeah, you should consider writing more often, because OBVIOUSLY you are very talented, and good, and stuff.)

anyway, so mem'ing right now. and then reading again. ♥

miximel July 14 2009, 03:47:15 UTC

;__; thank you - so, so much. ♥

asldkfj I used to write RyoDa in the JE fandom, and I've never written SHINee fic before and only like 3 k-pop fics and I didn't like them and they were short and. yeah. :( You're way too kind, bb, ty~ ♥ I'll definitely try to write more, omg.

Ah, it's worth a mem~? *_* <3