Fic: Strawberry Flavoured

Oct 19, 2012 17:25

Title: Strawberry Flavoured

Pairing/Characters: Nakamaru/Ueda, Maruconda, guest appearances from…

Rating: NC17? R?

Disclaimer: I do not own any of them since they sold themselves to J&A over 10 years ago.

Word Count: 1.5k

Warning: Un-betaed as usual.

Author's Note: Written for the the trick sugiex gave me for my Treat or Trick, and the request from snowaltz (It seems ( Read more... )

meme, rating: nc-17, member: nakamaru yuichi, length: one-shot, fic: others, meme: fluff bingo, member: ueda tatsuya, pairing: maruda

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sugiex October 19 2012, 11:24:03 UTC
His hair always looks like a wig from the eighties, and his shirts are eternally bright and crisp.

IS NAKAMARU'S HAIR THAT BAD? :O Too much starch, lol.

Ueda bites his lower lip slightly in an attempt to shake the urge to pounce on his boyfriend right then away.

I always figured Ueda would want to jump his partner immediately. I applaud her (legit made a mistake but not intending to change it)him for actually having the dencency to think about sitting through a movie.

And LOL @ Nakamaru owning Koki's porn video.

“You have such nice cock sucking lips, you know that?”

Your favourite line eh? 8DDDD

HAI, I THINK YOU SHOULD BE MARUDA'S RESIDENT PORN WRITER. ALTHOUGH I HAVE TO READ IT THROUGH MY FINGERS (WITH LOTS OF GAPS), I THINK I WILL LIKE MARUDA A LOT MORE. THANKS FOR WRITING 8DDD

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mixedstrategy October 19 2012, 15:04:08 UTC
IS NAKAMARU'S HAIR THAT BAD? I wrote it with the image of TTL!Nakamaru in mind what. Look like this Channel 8 Kampong show kind of hairstyle, no?

He got some self control one lah. Good mistake there!

Your favourite line eh? 8DDDD I was writing writing and then I realised that I didn't include any of my inappropriate confessions so I just inserted one that seemed must fitting. (no surface to bend him over and he's not flashing his abs nor wearing a wig)

Is that HAI a sigh? Haha. And did you just imply that you will like Maruda more if there's porn (which you didn't comment on at all, btw)??? 8DD

P.S. When I saw your original comment about Junno not appearing I had to bite my lip to stop myself from LOL-ing on the bus /has the same habit as my fictitious Ueda here

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sugiex October 21 2012, 13:38:04 UTC
Oh, TTL!Maru, no wonder 8D Now I get it!

On the contrary, Ueda likes sex. In fact, he loves it so much that he thinks that compared to his usual (self-thought) strict image, it make him look like a slut in bed.

I forgot to quote this line but as I read through it again, I think this is an excellent sentence *__* What flawless contradiction you have there!

You should totally write Part Two (name it Vanilla Flavoured or something) when Nakamaru goes over to Ueda's house and sweeps all of Ueda's nonsense off the table and bends him over it 8DDD Sounds ideal, y/y?

HAI = HI, lol. Something like OHAITHAR 8D

I didn't comment on that part because I have to read it through the gaps of my fingers (since both hands are on my face, I don't have anything left to type with) >////<

*thumbs up at choice of gif* He shakes his hips so well *stares a little longer, hmm..*

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snowaltz October 19 2012, 16:41:26 UTC
This fic deserves quotations in the comment. I'll switch on my comp tomorrow specially to do it <3

Oh such wonderful cock sucking lips you have, Tatsuya xDDD

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snowaltz October 21 2012, 06:32:13 UTC
Ueda Tatsuya is worried about sex.
The first sentence already made me lol! I can't imagine Ueda ever being worried about sex. He seems too wise in this matter xDD

Nakamaru had suggested that they go out for coffee at the nearby café
Woot, Nakamaruojichan taking the intuitive!

On the contrary, Ueda likes sex. In fact, he loves it so much that he thinks that compared to his usual (self-thought) strict image, it make him look like a slut in bed.
I love these 2 sentences. It's like so contradicting to the Ueda we know hahaha.

His hair always looks like a wig from the eighties
HAHAHAHA!

Ueda’s idea of laundry is to throw everything into the washer, transfer them into the dryer, and leave it in a pile on the floor so that he could just grab one in the morning.
No worries, Nakamaru can now wash Ueda's laundry with love <3 (I refer to today's Majissuka~)

Nakamaru’s hair is slightly tousled and he is wearing a casual checked shirt with the top few buttons undone, exposing, in Ueda’s opinion, just the right amount of skin and oh god the ( ... )

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mixedstrategy October 21 2012, 10:20:44 UTC
I love these 2 sentences. It's like so contradicting to the Ueda we know hahaha. Not saying that he is strict lor, he ownself think only :P

Actually I think Ueda's one is bigger than Nakamaru's *coughs* But Nakamaru's may be longer, I'm not sure hahaha. Erm I saw somewhere that the length of *ahem* is supposed to be 3 times the length of your thumb, and Nakamaru's thumb is longer than Ueda's haha. I think in general the more stuff I write the more I think Ueda wants to come punch me, lolz.

You know now when I see Ueda's lips, I keep thinking about this OMG. And I realise that when he had his princess hair, he used to make up his lips thinner. But now it's just his lips in its full glory OMG. Yes yes yes you know that day when we took photos with his uchiwa I was shocked at how thin his lips looked (that's why I ask you how to make lips look smaller haha) but nowadays he just let it be one lor. Colour darker also :P But how could you have never thought of them before this I've had that thought since the first time I saw him, orz > ( ... )

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effi_g October 20 2012, 06:52:23 UTC
Ahahaha when he read the title of the dvd...... OMG TATCHAN WATCH THAT!!! please oh please write a fic with the happenings on the vid!!.... I mean....... *cough* I'm not a perv *hides*

and I lolled at your confession inclusion :P a little disappointed it wasn't the bending him over a serface one though *pouts*

haha love it :P

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mixedstrategy October 21 2012, 10:37:16 UTC
I'm sure we'll all want to watch a DVD entitled My Name is Dangerous Cat HAHAHA :P I probably need to cleanse myself for a while after this NC17 writing and inappropriate confession making spree >___<;; /insists that she is usually very innocent

and I lolled at your confession inclusion :P a little disappointed it wasn't the bending him over a serface one though *pouts* I got that complain from sugiex yesterday too, while she was shoving her phone in my face with this page loaded and demanding me reply to your comment so that she can read more confessions >___< You people all bullying me! *sniff sniff*

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effi_g October 21 2012, 10:47:42 UTC
Hahahahaha well to be fair the bullying is now reciprocal with you and I :P
haha oh I'm sure you are innocent... yep definitely.... *cough* just like me ^^
LOL!! and I think she has every right to be disapointed like me, but tell her if she wants it she'll just have to write it herself :P although, you are on a roll with all this, maybe you should just keep going and write about bending Ued over a surface anyway :P

DO IT!!! you know you want to. Your innocence even says that you should ^^

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sugiex October 21 2012, 13:28:32 UTC
Hey! I don't write NC-17 things okay? /is the truly innocent one *blinks*

+infinity to "maybe you should just keep going and write about bending Ueda over a surface anyway"

And I'm going to hop over to your livejournal for inappropriate comments next 8D

The world just got a lot more exciting lately /fufufufu

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