Left 2 Die: Part 9

[mivalentina]

Reid tilted his head to rest on Luke’s and let his lips kiss the golden bangs. His breathing soon changed. He was sleeping soft and snoring, gently blowing Luke’s hair back and forth.

Luke softly moved enough to pull something from his pocket. When the soldier had tackled him he had felt the phone painfully crack against his hip. His first

Comments

[pabwecg]

Nicely done...hard to put down. Felt very real, in a weird zombie-ish kinda way.

Glad to hear that there's a second part.

[smoothlikebutta]

This was so entertaining! I was riveted throughout! I loved that Reid tried to get Luke away from the danger and that Luke was too stubborn to leave. I can't wait for the sequel.

[mamalaz]

This was so amazing, I was absolutely hooked! It must have taken you so long. Thank you for all the effort, I'm really looking forward to more!

[theshahofblah]

This was the Big bang fic I was least looking forward to. I am totally NOT into gore, or zombies or horror or anything but I figured I would give it a try. Just because you should always open yourself up to being proved wrong.

I loved it. It's very very well written and both Luke & Reid were very much in character in such a far-fetched setting. It was easy to visualise and very convincing in your description and narrative. It's clear you're very at home in this story. So thank you. Love the art too btw.

I found this through LRO but am posting my comment here.

[reilaroo]

I love this story. It has everything: LuRe, zombies, guns, a motorcycle, and kissing. I love stories that deal with a post-apocalyptic world. You did a good job of describing what this new world looks like now. The desolation, abandonment, and solitude. Luke walking into St. Louis along the car-strewn interstate was very creepy and disturbing. A very haunting scene. Great job!

I'm really looking forward to the sequel. I want to see Luke find Noah and realize that he isn't in love with him anymore. I want him to choose Reid. I think Reid needs to know that Luke isn't with him just because he can't find Noah. He needs that reassurance because he does love Luke.

Wonderful story! I love it a lot. I'll be rereading it as I wait for th sequel.