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mitsuruaki

Fic: Square One

Mar 07, 2011 19:29

Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Disclaimer: HAHAHAHA. BECAUSE THIS IS SO GOING TO BE AN EPISODE NEXT SEASON. NOT. Belongs to ACD and BBC. Not mitsuruaki. And they're probably grateful. Extremely grateful.
Warning: MOM, if/when you find this, do not read it. It will not make you happy. I repeat, will notTitle: Square One ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

nox_candida March 8 2011, 04:12:46 UTC

LOL!! I've told you more than once that I absolutely adore the way you write Sherlock--and this fic is absolutely no exception. Wonderful, marvelous, all those things!

And you added in the Three Continents Trope, which I love you for, and honestly, Sherlock and John's interaction there at the end was fantastic. Sherlock and Mycroft interaction, though, was even better. lol, I just love it when they snipe at each other. :D

This is really awesome for your first porn fic, too, just so you know. You knocked it out of the park. ;D

Anyway, I loved it and I'm glad that I was able to help you out with it. :D

mitsuruaki March 8 2011, 06:56:18 UTC

Awww, thank you! You were such a brilliant help; I don't know what I would have done without you! I still went a little bit crazy over this, and then fought with the rich text editor until I was on the brink of tears gave up tactfully retreated back to html. Not doing that again. Oh boy.

I did put that in there for you, actually. :D Lol. You know, I have such great fun writing Mycroft. I'm not even sure what it is about him...I'm glad you liked his rather short conversation with Sherlock. And John's variation on the 'love 'em and leave 'em' tactic. Loverboy indeed. XD

Thanks again. I seem to be hitting a lot of firsts in this fandom: first 5+1, first fairytale AU, first porn...it probably won't be the last, lol.

You've been a wonderful help and support, and I couldn't ask for more. <3

delicateflower8 March 9 2011, 18:20:46 UTC

GUH! John is such a tease! lol And poor Lestrade, not even knowing what he'd walked in on... I really want to see that scandalized expression on Mycroft's face! It would make my day! This was beautiful and wonderful and many other such words, as always. ^_^ Great job!

mitsuruaki March 9 2011, 19:53:54 UTC

John is a tease, lol. XD Thank you so much, darling!

So I have a lab practical today and two midterms tomorrow, and then finals next week, but I'll have more Snarled for you Sunday night. Even if it's not entirely finished I'll split it up and post what I've got, okay? :D

delicateflower8 March 10 2011, 03:39:01 UTC

No problem! I've waited this long, I can certainly wait another week or two. ^_^ To tell the truth, I have finals next week as well, so I won't have much time for reading, either. lol But rest assured, as soon as Snarled is updated, I will drop everything and read it! <3 Good luck on your exams!

mitsuruaki March 10 2011, 03:57:01 UTC

You too! <3 Maybe I can give us something to make the coming week less terrifying, lol. Thanks for your patience! <3

ningen_demonai March 11 2011, 06:29:24 UTC

Amazingly hot, but I think the thing I love best is how Sherlock is the one protesting. We read so many fics where he couldn't give half a damn about that while John is the one complaining, but here? John is having none of that. And the fangirls rejoice. :')b But I do feel terrible for Lestrade, he didn't deserve that treatment. I can't fully blame Sherlock, but still. He really ought to apologize but make no reference whatsoever to how John's mouth can drive him to distraction. :Db

mitsuruaki March 11 2011, 08:20:17 UTC

Yeah, we do see a lot of fics like that, don't we? XD I figured Sherlock (in this fic anyway, since their relationship is pre-established) would be familiar with not only what John's capable of, but his own reactions as well, and they'd both have a pretty good idea of each other's limits. And in this case John would go, 'yeah, that's do-able; let's go!' and Sherlock would be all 'NOW IS NOT THE BEST TIME TO TEST THEM, JOHN. I'M BUSY DOING IMPORTANT THINGS'. To which the only response John can give is 'Uh huh...drop your pants, Sherlock.' Lol. And the fangirls do rejoice. XD

I actually felt bad for Lestrade too, which is why I made the apology (or some semblance of one, anyway) necessary. Knowing Sherlock though, he probably would not-so-subtly reference John's part in the whole thing in revenge, and end up mortifying all of them. For life. ;D

Glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting!

ningen_demonai March 11 2011, 20:25:49 UTC

Bow chicka wow wow~

OGod, my mental image of that apology is probably a bit not good but hilarious nonetheless.

♥

mitsuruaki March 11 2011, 21:12:29 UTC

Oh yeah. XD You know Sherlock can't give an apology without making everyone else regret that they asked for it. Lol!

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mitsuruaki March 12 2011, 22:59:04 UTC

Lol, glad you liked it! I think once you cross the line into the magical land of porn, there really is no going back. I'm sure there'll be more at some point, no worries. ;D

littlelorayne March 25 2011, 19:03:08 UTC

hhhhhhhh. Damn good job for a first attempt! Probably shouldn't have read this on the library computer, there's a high risk of embarassment ;) Ah well, it's worth it. Maybe you could sneak a little of this into Snarled... *hint* Anyway, very hot, very funny, we love tease!John :))

mitsuruaki June 17 2011, 10:57:56 UTC

Thank you! *bows* I completely understand about library computers--been there, done that. XD I still can't read this all the way through with a straight face, to be honest. I need to get back to work on Snarled, but I'm afraid the Disney-ness will trump porn when it comes to Snarled. Innuendo is fair game though! Glad you enjoyed it.