Fic: A Slowly Dawning Attraction 2/2

[mitsuruaki]

Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Disclaimer: Belongs to ACD and BBC, not mitsuruaki. Still love you guys, though.

Title: A Slowly Dawning Attraction
Author: mitsuruaki
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Prompt: 5 times Sherlock and John nearly kissed at work, and 1 time they did. :D
Rated: PG-13/R
Words: 12,143

Comments

[tartancravat]

Oh man, that kiss. Reading that was like being hooked up to one of those things it stories that make you feel like you're actually in the video game, or whatever. Fabulous fic.

[mitsuruaki]

Thanks! XD And if only that virtual reality technology was actually available...lol. I tried. Glad you liked it!

[thatautumn]

Is there some way to get this fic via IV drip? I want it in my veins!

Amazing! <3

[mitsuruaki]

If I ever find anyone who discovers a way, I'll be sure to let you know! Lol!

Thank you! <3

[ourdramaqueen]

I totally agree with tartancravat! Extremely well done, I could feel the tension between them through the whole story, and then the kiss at the end.... *fans self*

Also, I totally ♥ this:

simultaneously throwing out his right with the index finger extended in the universal sign for please hold, making out with my John now.

[mitsuruaki]

:DD *brings in air conditioning*

Thanks! UST is fun to write, but it started getting to me and driving me nuts around part 4, lol. And somehow the last part wound up 5x as long as any of the previous parts. Idek how.

And yes, that line...sums up everything right there, I should think! Glad you liked!

[keladry_lupin]

I started thinking of this quote from The Vicar of Dibley about halfway through non-kiss number four. *points to icon* What I wouldn't give to have someone bellow that line at Sherlock and John at some point in the second series.

You ratcheted the UST to nearly unbearable levels and then delivered beautifully; it was definitely worth the wait.

[mitsuruaki]

Thank you! And that icon is perfect, it really is. I approve. Lol. I would give what is left of my soul to have someone, anyone yell that at them in the second series! I really would.

Oh UST. Good to know it was worth waiting for! :)

[fantasysci5]

LMAO!!! This was so amazing! The fact that Sherlock forgot Mycroft was there was funny, and I was thinking to myself, "But Mycroft's there!" :P

There were so many funny moments in this, like "thinking is boring". My favorite, though, was the "Please hold, I'm kissing my John right now"; I laughed so ahrd at that, and the picture it presented! I love John-gets-kidnapped fics, so the last part hit the spot. So awesome!!!! :D

[mitsuruaki]

Yaaaaaaaay! And you know Mycroft chose John's chair on purpose so he'd be less visible from the kitchen. He just knows these things. Out of sight, out of mind. ;D

I like knowing I've made you guys laugh! And hit the spot. It's a good feeling.