[Fic] The Secret of Susannah von Wincott 1/?

[mitsukiyame13]

Bully [n.] - Someone who inflicts pain, whether emotional or physical, to someone seemingly weaker then them.

- Not a real bull.

-  A 'Higher Power' with a sick sense of humor that has nothing better to do. [see last few        lines.]

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3 pm; Murata’s high school grounds

He was sly. He was

Comments

[littlelinor]

There are a few grammar issues at the end but the fic itself is precious.
Keep going~ (and I'm still open for betaing this or further chapters)

[mitsukiyame13]

Where? D:

I told you I was bad at this xD

Really? You will? *O* Yey~ Thanks! :)

[cleverlilwill]

Haha! Oh man, this was a very amusing read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^

[mitsukiyame13]

Thank you ^^

I'm already working at chapter two~ xD

[spazzimidori]

*gives you teddy bear for the fic* ♥

I also loved the bully definition part, after reading the last paragraph.

[mitsukiyame13]

You read it! \O/ xD

Lol. In every chapter there'll be definition parts as some kind of foreshadowing somehow. xD

I already posted chapter 2 in fanfiction actually, but I'm still waiting for my beta-readers to betaread chapter one, I'll post chap. 2 here ASAP. ^^

Beware of OC in next chapter. He's kind of stabby. If you know what I mean

[spazzimidori]

*stalks your ff.net*

No I don't know what you mean. What I think of "stabby" is ... stabbing with a knife or something. *bricked*

Go online?

[mitsukiyame13]

It's unbeta-ed like this one, so there might be grammar mistakes. *PHAILZ AT VERBZ*

When I saw the edited version, I was like:

WTFWTFWTF. What was up with me when I wrote it? :O

Thank Shinou for beta-readers. @-)

Sure, I'll go online [after you reply to this]

But don't expect me to be all that responsive. :| I'll be doing chapter 2 of this crackfic I'm doing with my friend, and I'll be revising her chapter as well, so... Yeah. :))