So this isn’t actually the first thing I’ve written for this canon but it’s the first that’s getting posted. And the one that’s sitting in reserve is a plotty gen epic, and the one that’s getting posted first is the shameless bondage porn. Funny, that
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Instead, I'll just thank you so much for reading this~ :hugs:
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She unravels. Her head falls back like she’s coming up for air but she doesn’t breathe, whispers out my name instead. It doesn’t take me long after that, it couldn’t...
As hot as these lines are, they somehow manage to be even more beautiful. What an excellent work - thank you for sharing!
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IDK, I suspect it's how I would feel if I was reading about to real life people doing it. I guess Collins sold the characters very well for me.
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I did read it anyway, but I don't feel like I can say much about liking it or not liking it because the whole time I was more focused on "OMG you're being such a voyeur, self stop it"
It's strange, I don't think I would feel this way if it was about Katniss and Peeta or Katniss and Gale. SPOILER: IDK, Finnick's death was pretty fucked up in the books. Even more so than Prim's death. It got to me. And he was very protective of Annie, so I feel like he would disapprove of me reading this.
IDK WHAT I'M EVEN TALKING ABOUT IGNORE ME
Ha, and here I think that's actually really okay to feel, since it's such a private moment for them and they have so little privacy. I don't know if I was precisely going for that, but it's a reaction that makes a lot of sense to me and makes me feel good about the writing. So thank you. :smile:
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