Comments | mithen: Ficlet: Eleutherios (Steve/Diana)

mithen

Ficlet: Eleutherios (Steve/Diana)

Sep 27, 2009 16:18

Title: Eleutherios
Characters/Pairings: Steve Trevor/Wonder Woman
Rating: R
Warnings: None needed
Summary: Steve goes dancing with Diana and learns what it means to love a goddess.
Word count: 790
Notes: for
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ch: wonder woman, ch: steve trevor, p: steve trevor/wonder woman

Comments 12

brushed_velvet September 27 2009, 15:52:49 UTC

I only know Steve/Diana from the Justice League cartoon and this is quite a step up from that. ;)

There's a lovely tailspin quality to it though and it feels very primal but with touching moments of true emotion.

Happy birthday to bradygirl! :D

mithen September 28 2009, 11:57:41 UTC

Steve/Diana from the cartoon is a sweet nod, but I kind of miss their actual comics canon together...

Oh, I like the "tailspin" word, the story started off kind of light and funny and even as I wrote it it slowly curled (to my surprise) into something darker, but I liked that because I felt kind of like I got dragged in along with Steve, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

starsandsea September 27 2009, 17:48:45 UTC

Oooh! This was brilliant!

I love Steve's confusion at first! Hee. *pets him* And then Diana! *swoons* I love all the descriptions of her, and of her dress! I really loved the froth of black lace across her thighs! It seems so pretty... :)

mithen September 28 2009, 13:06:34 UTC

*grin* Thank you! Imagining Diana in a little black dress just tickles me, somehow. And Steve and I were both a little confused at the beginning of the story, since I wasn't sure where it was going to go either. :) Diana surprised both of us!

ccarroll003 September 27 2009, 18:17:08 UTC

Love me some het! And of course Diana is on top. LOL!

mithen September 28 2009, 13:08:27 UTC

Oh, Diana is most definitely the top, lol. In so many senses of the word. And I really enjoy stretching and writing het now and then--I should do it more often!

saavikam77 September 27 2009, 20:28:56 UTC

WOWSA. ~O_O~ What a fantastic, *gorgeous* image. Just... WOW.

mithen September 28 2009, 13:10:26 UTC

Oh, thanks so much! I was kind of surprised this wandered off into R-rated territory, but I went with it, lol. Glad you liked the results!

bradygirl_12 September 28 2009, 00:34:36 UTC

I can't tell you how much I am in awe of this, Mithen!

It's sensuous, wild, and wonderful! :)

Diana dancing to techno just makes me laugh, and Steve does think of his Princess with pretty dolls and silk dresses. ;)

Your description of Diana's dress is absolutely delicious!

And, yes, the Princess would know the power of dance, as any good Pagan would. :)

I love Steve's reactions! Even when frightened, he still adores and trusts his Angel. :)

Thank you EVER so much for this, Mithen! :)

*does the Dance Of Joy*

mithen September 28 2009, 14:28:48 UTC

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! Diana just kind of grabbed this one and ran with it, and like Steve I was kind of just along for the ride. :) But happy to be there! Diana as a Pagan goddess is always so fun to write, there's so much rich background there to explore...

Happy birthday! (Or day after your birthday by now). :)