FIC: Two Forms, One Soul (3/9)

Jul 11, 2009 11:32

Title: Two Forms, One Soul, Chapter Three
Pairing/Characters: Bruce/Clark, Alfred Pennyworth
Continuity: Animated series, a few years after B:TAS.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Clark talks to Alfred and confronts Bruce about what he's learned.
Word Count: 2500
Warnings: None necessary
Notes: Written for the 20_inkspots  challenge with
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ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce, series: two forms one soul, ch: alfred pennyworth

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mithen July 11 2009, 10:34:23 UTC
I'm having a lot of fun with the seductive powers part! I did a lot of "research" in fiction, lol...

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rjunkie July 11 2009, 03:05:25 UTC
Beautiful. Really. Clark's not the only one mesmerized.

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mithen July 11 2009, 10:35:51 UTC
Mmmm, thanks! Bruce is one sexy, sexy vamp--and great fun to write. :)

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ctbn60 July 11 2009, 03:26:52 UTC
Another great chapter. Bruces pain is so palpable. Clark is such a good friend but I think he isn't thinking clearly. I'm worried for both of them. Well done.

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mithen July 11 2009, 10:37:28 UTC
Vampires are definitely a good reason to worry! Even a strong-willed soul like Bruce will have a hard time with it... and Clark may be in over his dead...

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ctbn60 July 11 2009, 15:49:51 UTC
Um...did you mean to type dead? because I'm REALLY worried now.

I'm sort of a vampire freak. I'm obsessed actually with them. so this fic is really appealing to me. I like the struggle and seeing how and if Bruce will come to terms with his affliction. I'm waiting patiently for the next part but would love this to go on for a very long time as a series. Yeah, like i said a bit obsessed. *g*

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mithen July 13 2009, 04:24:37 UTC
Um...did you mean to type dead? because I'm REALLY worried now.

*more innocent whistling*

Uh, no, that was just a Freudian slip for "head". Really. :D

I never thought I was into vampire stories--I'd read a few, like Rice, and they were fine and all...it was only when it was Bruce as the vampire that it just hit all my buttons just right, lol...

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bradygirl_12 July 11 2009, 04:10:39 UTC
The last line: excellent!

That's the whole crux of this, isn't it? Even though Clark knows what he'll suffer, as Bruce has laid out so clearly, he still wants it, and not just because of Bruce's vampiric enchantments.

That might be the saving grace for both of them.

Great descriptions of vampire 'life'!

Ooh, the shattering of the mirror! We all know why. Poor Bruce.

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mithen July 11 2009, 10:39:44 UTC
That's the whole crux of this, isn't it? Even though Clark knows what he'll suffer, as Bruce has laid out so clearly, he still wants it, and not just because of Bruce's vampiric enchantments.

Oh, I like the way you put that. :) And yes, Clark becomes more and more eager even as Bruce insists on backing away as much as possible...

I liked imagining vampire society! They have to be very careful who they choose to turn, and she decided the Wayne heir was an excellent choice... she underestimated his willpower badly, though!

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hitokaji July 11 2009, 04:38:06 UTC
Oh,my! This is getting better and better! The intensity! ;D
I really admire Bruce's will power not to yield to the temptation! He's a true hero. :)

Can't wait for the next part!!

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mithen July 11 2009, 10:41:35 UTC
I really admire Bruce's will power not to yield to the temptation! He's a true hero. :)

*happy purring* Thank you, that's a wonderful compliment! Bruce has willpower and bravery to spare, but it's only going to get worse...

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