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mithen

Fic: ...Or Forever Hold Your Peace

May 17, 2009 07:58

Title: ...Or Forever Hold Your Peace
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Talia al Ghul, Ra's al Ghul, Alfred Pennyworth
Notes: For
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ch: ra's al ghul, ch: talia al ghul, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce, ch: alfred pennyworth

Comments 65

northern_star May 17 2009, 01:34:15 UTC

heee! Oh, I laughed so hard at this one. :D

The "getting out of the closet" line totally killed. hehe! And I loved how Bruce used that silly little "can't remember" line to get Clark to kiss him a couple more times - so cute. :D

Awesome work!

mithen May 17 2009, 10:56:41 UTC

Yay, I'm glad the comedy worked! Most of the time this one clicked for me, so I told myself at least I had fun writing it... :D

And I loved how Bruce used that silly little "can't remember" line to get Clark to kiss him a couple more times - so cute. :D

Bruce is not one to let pass an opportunity to request smooching without it looking like a request. *grin*

yavieriel May 17 2009, 02:59:54 UTC

Bwahaha! I think I need to send this to my friend who got married earlier today, because that was the most brilliantly hilarious wedding disaster /ever/.

mithen May 17 2009, 10:57:32 UTC

Oh, nicely timed story then! I hope her wedding went much, much better. :)

kittymayhem May 17 2009, 04:51:12 UTC

Good grief! I didn't know whether to laugh or gag, or cry from laughing so hard! That was awesome!

"--and buttercream! Make sure it's the highest-quality buttercream frosting!" Bruce Wayne called after Ubu's retreating back. "Only the very sweetest for my sweet," he cooed as he kissed Talia's hands.

Oh...oh god. *gags and laughs hysterically* Oh please! My stomach hurts from the sweet talk...and laughing so hard!

Oh...okay. *breathes and sputters* So funny!

Awesome work! :)

mithen May 17 2009, 10:59:30 UTC

Oh...oh god. *gags and laughs hysterically* Oh please! My stomach hurts from the sweet talk...and laughing so hard!

Brucie Wayne: Master of the Saccharine Endearment. It was way too much fun to come up with more and more ridiculous things for him to call poor Talia... :)

Yay, I'm glad I made you laugh! *bounces*

dizmo May 17 2009, 06:10:54 UTC

I cannot stop giggling. I really... really cannot stop giggling.

Oh, just... GAH, that was awesomely hilarious.

*giggles some more*

hitokaji May 17 2009, 06:11:16 UTC

Awww---poor Talia. But,gezzz,her daddy cracks me up so much! LOL!

And Clark hired the thugs is funny, but it's funnier when they were so damn late! Seems like you couldn't find reliable gang in Gotham these days, huh? *giggles*

And last, Ra talking about sending Bruce a wedding bill? Just imagine his face on the TV makes me laugh so hard!

Thank you for cracking me up! lol.

mithen May 17 2009, 14:31:14 UTC

Seems like you couldn't find reliable gang in Gotham these days, huh?

Poor Clark! You can't get good help in Gotham...

And last, Ra talking about sending Bruce a wedding bill? Just imagine his face on the TV makes me laugh so hard!

The ultimate revenge--sticking Bruce with the bill! And yeah, imagining him being interviewed on television cracked me up somehow, it's so...mundane!

Yay, I'm glad it made you laugh!