Clarity of Purpose, 34/35

Oct 07, 2015 22:58

Title: Clarity of Purpose, Chap. 34/35
Chapter Summary: Scenes from the road homeward for Thorin and Bilbo.
Relationship: Thorin/Bilbo
Characters: Thorin Oakenshield, Bilbo, Balin, Celeborn.
Fandom: Hobbit/Lord of the Rings. Begins in 2968, twenty-six years after the events of "Clarity of Vision" and fifty years before the canonical events of "Lord ( Read more... )

ch: bilbo baggins, series: clarity of vision, ch: thorin oakenshield, p: thorin/bilbo

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shirebound October 7 2015, 15:19:22 UTC
I can't tell you how much I admire your story, especially the moments of gentle humor and love that peek out from every corner.

“Would a war-stallion of Rohan be content to live in the Shire and give rides to small hobbit-children the rest of his days?” Thorin asked.

Petunia snorted and bared his teeth at Thorin, then went back to begging Bilbo to keep petting him.

Lovely.

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mithen October 8 2015, 07:18:31 UTC
I can't tell you how much I admire your story, especially the moments of gentle humor and love that peek out from every corner.

Petunia MAY actually be the reason this chapter ended up getting published, because I realized I didn't want to have Thorin and Bilbo forget him! And oh, your comment means the world to me, finding those moments is a huge reason for writing for me. I'm so happy to share them with you!

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ilovetobefree October 7 2015, 22:14:38 UTC
AWWWW!
Thank you so much Mithen! *big hug*
This was probably my best birthday ever! So many goodies. And this lovely story with my favorite characters. YAY! *happy dances*
I didn't manage to read it properly, so I'll be back with more comments soon.
You made my day!!! <333

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mithen October 8 2015, 07:19:34 UTC
Happy birthday, dear Lis! I thought this would be able to stand alone, but it refused, but I did want to give you something full of happy quiet moments traveling (the best kind of moments!)

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jedibuttercup October 8 2015, 00:08:04 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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mithen October 8 2015, 07:20:15 UTC
Awww, thanks! It was a real pleasure to let them just meander and enjoy the road a bit...

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starsandsea October 8 2015, 18:14:21 UTC
“And another thing--most of our time together has been in fall or winter.” Bilbo closed his eyes and listened to the crickets and peepers filling the summer air with song. “I like this.”

“I like it as well,” Thorin said, and even with his eyes closed, Bilbo could hear the smile in his voice.

Awwwww! That's a lovely little interchange - I hadn't realized they hadn't traveled alone together either!

“Orc arrow,” he said lightly when Thorin indicated the lame leg with a glance. “He did not live to gloat about scratching a dwarf-warrior!”

Balin! I'm so he's been spared in this verse!

In front of them stood a tall figure dressed in green, his silver hair loose around his shoulders: Celeborn, Lord of Lothlórien.

Eeeee, Celeborn! I'm so pleased we got to see him again!

“I am majestic no longer,” he said, “But merely Thorin Oakenshield, soon to be Thorin Baggins, if I understand the customs of the Shire.”

“You do,” said Bilbo, blushing and adding in a lower voice, “And you are always majestic.”

*squees and flails* Also, Bilbo!

“ ( ... )

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mithen October 10 2015, 01:03:30 UTC
Balin and Celeborn working together! When they decided to show up I knew this couldn't exactly stand alone, it had to be linked to the bigger story...

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! PETUNIA! PETUNIA! PETUNIA! :D :D :D

Petunia was the other reason! He had to make it back to the Shire with them!

*flails and squees and hearts them both* Oh, how wonderful it is to have them both content and happy and without and urgency or quests hanging over them...

I knowwww, the reason I almost didn't post it is that there is no urgency and so it doesn't quite...you know...move the story forward, but darn it, they deserve that time together and I'm so happy to dwell on it a bit...

ASDGHLHLSKAKSKF!!! Oh, these lines, these lines-! They actually made me tear up, just-! *wibbles and flails and hearts Bilbo and Thorin and this whole story SO MUCH*

They made me tear up writing them, so I'm glad! Oh Thorin, oh Bilbo...

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ilovetobefree October 9 2015, 11:26:27 UTC
When it became clear where they were going, Bilbo laughed with delight and ran ahead to the stables. “Petunia!”
The great purple-black stallion neighed joyously and kicked at the sides of his stall as he heard their voices.
:D

Petunia snorted and bared his teeth at Thorin, then went back to begging Bilbo to keep petting him.

Sweet. :)

“There could be no fairer weather than that in which I first met you,” Bilbo said gallantly.
Lovely said.

“Your finest room for myself and my fiance!” Thorin roared above the din. .
WOW!

“That time is past. The world is wide, and we have seen much of it, and now we return of our own free will for our well-deserved rest together.”
YES!

No more grand adventures,” he said again, and then added in a whisper, “Except perhaps the very last. With you.”
“Always,” said Thorin. AWWW! *hugs them both ( ... )

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mithen October 10 2015, 01:07:47 UTC
I missed Petunia! So it was really good to write him in again... I'm so glad I could make you smile! And I hope you had a wonderful birthday!

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