Comments | mithen: FIC: Six Impossible Things Before Breakfast (Sherlock/John, NC-17)

mithen

FIC: Six Impossible Things Before Breakfast (Sherlock/John, NC-17)

Sep 12, 2013 19:07

Title: Six Impossible Things Before Breakfast
Pairing/Characters: John/Sherlock
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: Mind-control drugs and the resulting consent issues.
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Summary: A new drug that links sexual arousal to obedience? Sherlock is intrigued, but there are no handy test subjects around. Oh, wait...
Word Count: 6000

( Cutting through all the technical language, it appears that a person dosed with this drug would find it nearly impossible to disobey direct commands, and would in fact find obeying such commands highly arousing. It creates a positive feedback loop: the more the subjects obey, the more pleasure they experience, the more they want to obey. )

ch: john watson, ch: sherlock holmes, p: sherlock/john, fandom: bbc sherlock

Comments 31

queen0fcups September 12 2013, 23:37:30 UTC

AAH BEST THING EVER OH MY GOD

*dead of spontaneous combustion*

(btw, totally knew the drug wasn't real all along, it was pretty obvious if one knows Sherlock :D)

mithen September 13 2013, 00:54:55 UTC

Hehe, yay! Happy earlyish birthday!

And it's pretty obvious it's not real--Sherlock would never drug John! (Well, okay, he admittedly totally tried to in canon, but besides that...) *grin*

cleflink September 13 2013, 00:40:37 UTC

just my brilliance and your beautiful, lunatic trust

That may be the best description of why they work so well together that I've ever seen.

Also, unf. Love me some subby-and-loving-it John.

mithen September 13 2013, 00:57:12 UTC

Thank you so much! John's ability to trust Sherlock no matter what is just...amazingly appealing. And I might just slightly adore writing John as an unabashed (okay, slightly abashed, but only enough to have more fun with it) sub...

lauramcewan September 14 2013, 14:13:20 UTC

I thoroughly agree. And the story was hot as hell. The vulnerability in Sherlock himself to John's love gave a lovely extra edge.

mithen September 15 2013, 14:13:23 UTC

Oh, I am so glad that vulnerability came through! Because John isn't quite aware of it himself and so it stayed a bit under the surface at times... Thanks for letting me know it worked for you, I do love Sherlock when he's just that touch uncertain...

shaindyl September 13 2013, 04:00:05 UTC

Good god almighty, tell me there's more. That was...wow. I want to see how far Sherlock can take John just using his mind and voice.

queen0fcups September 13 2013, 04:38:11 UTC

I second this, if you think you have it in you :D

surreal_angela September 13 2013, 08:42:31 UTC

Third. This was amazing.

mithen September 15 2013, 05:10:18 UTC

Hee, thank you! I am busily working on fun scenarios for a blissfully zonked John now. :)

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danlef September 13 2013, 06:59:38 UTC

Wow. just wow. so perfect. John's trust and Sherlock's surprise at the extent of it. Oh god.

mithen September 13 2013, 15:30:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I am such a sucker for John trusting Sherlock completely and Sherlock finding that oddly wondrous-- that "you could" and startled laugh in Reichenbach Fall rather sealed my fate with these two, I think.

arianedevere September 13 2013, 12:15:49 UTC

Holy ....

What blithering idiot let me read this at work?

Oh. That would be me.

Do you know how difficult it is not whimpering in front of my colleague?!

While it seemed likely that Sherlock hadn't drugged John, I wasn't convinced either way until you confirmed it. Lovely, lovely story.

mithen September 15 2013, 06:13:04 UTC

Do you know how difficult it is not whimpering in front of my colleague?!

Considering I planned this one out often during boring meetings...yes. *grin* But I'm delighted it got the same response from you!

I'm glad it wasn't absolutely certain Sherlock hadn't actually drugged John--to be honest, his little stunt in "Hounds" is my least favorite moment with him (only the fact that John seems to have no serious problem with it saves him) and I couldn't bring myself to have him do it again--but the fact that he just might makes for a fun frisson while writing!