Comments | mithen: FIC: Strong as Gossamer

mithen

FIC: Strong as Gossamer

Aug 06, 2013 22:53

Title: Strong as Gossamer
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Consensual BDSM.
Continuity: Comics
Summary: How to restrain a Kryptonian effectively? Bruce has some unorthodox ideas...
Word Count: 2400

( Clasp your hands together and put them above your head. )

fandom: dc comics, ch: bruce wayne, ch: clark kent, p: clark/bruce

Comments 27

lysryu August 6 2013, 15:35:36 UTC

Marvelously done! A deliciously sensual read. Bruce's creative inspiration from the successful outcome there at the end made me chuckle.

mithen August 7 2013, 01:52:43 UTC

Mmmm, super-senses just make for some of the most fun writing! I'm so glad you enjoyed!

.... ranger_girl0301 August 6 2013, 15:50:44 UTC

...I....ohh...

*goopuddle*

Re: .... mithen August 7 2013, 01:53:28 UTC

Eeep, thanks! The boys are also a bit puddly at the moment. *grin* Glad you liked!

rileyc August 6 2013, 15:56:58 UTC

Words fail me... But I think I need a cold shower.

I love how Bruce uses Clark's strength to achieve this. Leave it to the Bat to come up with something so ingenious!

Great job!

mithen August 7 2013, 01:54:58 UTC

Thank you so much! It's been too long since I smutted it up with these two. Bruce is, of course, an expert at using Clark's powers against him, for good or for awesome. :) Endlessly inventive playboys are just a joy to write...

queen0fcups August 6 2013, 16:34:20 UTC

*THUD*

mithen August 7 2013, 01:56:10 UTC

Bruce was...having too much fun here! He kept throwing me these looks like "If you don't write me any smut for seven months I am GOING to have my fun." :) I CAN DENY HIM NOTHING.

queen0fcups August 7 2013, 02:16:57 UTC

Never try to deny Bruce! He always gets his way! Deliciously so!

bradygirl_12 August 6 2013, 16:56:20 UTC

*fans self*

The poetic language is marvelous! Lines like...

He could hear the blood in his veins cascading downward to pool and pulse at his groin, could hear the fibers of the silk thread rubbing against each other and his lust-sharpened skin.

...and the entire paragraph, really!

And this:

Words clustered and shifted in Clark's brain like clouds of stars, he struggled to catch some from the pleasure to give to Bruce.

And, finally, this:

he need to move seized him and seemed to throw him into space; with a titanic effort he crushed the need into nothingness and let his orgasm sweep through him like a solar wind, turning him to particles of light that neither moved nor thought, but--for a timeless, perfect moment--simply were.

The description of Clark's senses/sensations was incredibly erotic, and leave it to Bruce to take bondage and turn it on its head! And his letting go was beautiful to see.

Great job! :)

mithen August 7 2013, 01:58:55 UTC

The astronomical terms kind of surprised me when I was writing, but then I was like "Well, Clark actually knows what a solar wind feels like, so who am I to say it's too poetical?" :D Also, Bruce letting go will NEVER be amazingly fun to write, he gets to do it so rarely... Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, I really needed to give these guys some smut for a change!