Fic: Recriminations [ G - Harry ]

[mithborien]

Title: Recriminations

Author: mithborien

Word Count: 582

Rating: G

Characters: Harry

Note: Written for jamie2109 AWDT prompt except I kinda deliberately misinterpreted the prompt.

Comments

[nocturnali]

Wow.
If that's what happens when you deliberately misinterpret the prompt, feel free to do it every time.
That was heartreakingly beautiful.
And a different approach, very nice.

Thank you.

[mithborien]

Hah, thankyou :)

I think I'm misinterpreting the propmt this week as well. Well not so much misinterpreting as rather rearranging a bit :P If I can make it work I should have a 3000 word fic to share. Eek.

[nocturnali]

Excellent.
It's all open to interpretation. I've done it too on a few occasions.

[bambu345]

One of the most tragic things about Harry is that he, too, is one of the innocents sacrificed in the wizarding civil war. I, too, am one who thinks that if Harry survives he would be deeply warped by what has happened.

Your vignette is a beautiful extrapolation from canon. I particularly like the fact that you have him eschewing his magic. I also like the implied imagery of the littered parchment rising in height, like the upwelling of his grief and guilt poured onto the page in snippets.

Very nice.

[mithborien]

Thankyou :) That was a great review.

[bambu345]

It was my pleasure. Do you mind if I friend you? I'd like to read your other pieces of work as they pop up in my f-list.

[mithborien]

No, of course not :) I am going to friend you back.

[beautyfulevil]

Aww; that's so sad. *wipes tears*
It's really well written though.