china doll

Jul 05, 2012 16:09

china doll, r, suho/luhan, 3,500 w.
Joonmyun always had a thing for dolls, preferably china and porcelain made ones.
he doesn’t talk to his dolls anymore, his mind just clouded of thoughts of lu han and how his lips would feel against his. )

g: angst, luhan, *fic, l:short, suho, luhan/suho

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ssehun July 5 2012, 08:40:12 UTC
i love it! zomg i have a fascination with dolls in fanfiction and this is one of the best i've read :c

is it bad that i liked the ending or

(i added it to my memories, if you don't mind)

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oldriane July 5 2012, 09:36:40 UTC
it is indeed creepy.. and dolls are in, made things even creepier ;A;
the plot is okay :D

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mocchajo July 5 2012, 11:10:34 UTC
I was a happy camper when I saw Suho/Luhan
then I read the summary and went (´・_・`)

Knew it won't happily, but still hoping when Suho thinks he might be normal /sobs
But I enjoyed this still, thank you for writing and sharing ♥

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the_maknae July 5 2012, 16:26:09 UTC
Wow...just wow. This was all sorts of creepy and I loved it <3

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batterydead July 6 2012, 00:49:10 UTC
This is merely astonishing; I love it. It is both suspenseful and creepy. I love the whole tone of the fic. I also love all of the imagery; I can picture everything clearly! Suho's idiosyncrasy of playing with dolls and breaking their heads off is peculiar, but interesting. I feel sorry for Luhan. It's unfortunate that he just had to hang out with the wrong guy xD.

"Maybe he is normal."

Suho dear, if this has to be put in reconsideration, then you definitely aren't normal. LOL

And

"Luhan is just like one of those porcelain dolls that he liked, except he’s responding to Joonmyeon’s touches and is giving him company."

This is probably the creepiest sentence in your fic. I shivered, I swear.

I am definitely adding this to my list of all time favorite fanfics :D~

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