This will be the silliest comment you get today, I'm sure, but that pose just makes me ashamed. What a lovely straight back! If I sat like that I'd be slouching everywhere... *hangs head*
Bah, that's not a silly comment at all... It caught my eye, too. She has very good posture in general, but it shows more in this picture than in most, I think, because she was sitting on a very uncomfortable rock which didn't allow for any comfy slouching. Also, I may very well have told her to sit up straight, as I am the kind of über-demanding, über-perfectionistic and über-obnoxious photographer who does that kind of thing.
Come on, you can give me something sillier than that!
This is fantastic! I love how even though everything is in shadow, her figure is clearly defined from the background. That is a real nice job in the composition of this shot.
I love the framing also, I am a big fan of negative space. I love how even though there is no doubt as to what the subject is here, my eye still has to wander a bit to make sure I don't miss anything.
The one thing I would like to see though, is the dark areas to be darker. It may just be my monitor, or the way the internet seems to fade colors a bit, but I think this would "pop" even more than it does if the shadows were darker - without blowing out the highlights.
Re: Actually...eight_thirteenNovember 3 2006, 14:29:49 UTC
Yeah, I like that better, I am always inclined toward lots of contrast, it gives more "richness" to an image.
I think that if you had cropped this square, or even centered your subject it would have watered down the image a lot. I like how your cropping implies the continuation of the tunnel even though you cannot see it. It is a very nice lead in to her figure. Kudos!
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I'm sorry, it's just that really caught my eye!
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Come on, you can give me something sillier than that!
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I love the framing also, I am a big fan of negative space. I love how even though there is no doubt as to what the subject is here, my eye still has to wander a bit to make sure I don't miss anything.
The one thing I would like to see though, is the dark areas to be darker. It may just be my monitor, or the way the internet seems to fade colors a bit, but I think this would "pop" even more than it does if the shadows were darker - without blowing out the highlights.
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I think that if you had cropped this square, or even centered your subject it would have watered down the image a lot. I like how your cropping implies the continuation of the tunnel even though you cannot see it. It is a very nice lead in to her figure. Kudos!
I have not made an announcement yet, because I am afraid of jinxing it. I don't have it in writing yet, but the other bidders were told to take a hike and I have a verbal agreement that the place is mine! Right now we are in the process of getting inspections and going over paperwork-lots of paperwork!
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Nice use of negative space, saturation, contrast, excellent pose blah blah blah...
All I think of when I look at this is the song you are (were) listening to.
"We are two mariners, our ship's sole survivors, in this belly of a whale."
Great, now I have to go through all eight minutes of that damn thing.
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Good song, though. Quite worth sitting through for eight minutes. :-)
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