Naruto, "Friendly Rivalry," Kakashi/Iruka, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

I love this pairing, I really do. This is a story inspired by conversations held simultaneously with sircheeks21 and matthewfullhart, who have answered my Naruto questions and assuaged my fangirlish fears above and beyond the call of duty. My love and thanks to the both of them for putting up with me so politely

Comments

[chrstphrl]

Okay, so I loved this pairing already. You have taken them and made them sweet and loving without emasculating either. And Kakashi thinking of Iruka while he masturbated was just freaking HOT (though the thought of Gai jerking of squicks me a little). Beautiful as always.

I'm being sucked into another fandom aren't I? ^_^

[mistr3ssquickly]

Oh I do hope you'll join this fandom, dear. You could win another hoarde of adoring fanboys and fangirls with your writing and your art. Seriously.

I'm so glad you liked this story. My favorite thing about this pairing, much like with the Havoc/Roy pairing, is that they're both men, not boys like I dealt with in Russel/Ed and Al/Danny (did you know, by the way, that my latest Ed/Russel was my 100th Ed/Russel story?). Both know what they want and have it, and now just have to work to *keep* it.

Thank you so much for reading what I write, dear. I love you so much! *cuddle*

[chrstphrl]

Noise: Nights in White Satin by the Moody Blues

And this is one of my all time favorite songs.

*snuggles*

[mistr3ssquickly]

Gah, me too! Listen to it carefully ... the first time I heard it, I thought it was sung by a boy who's just come out to his family and has either been thrown out of the house or has committed suicide. Amazingly, the lyrics fit for that interpretation as well as others.

*sneaks away*

[chrstphrl]

You are so right. I actually didn't really hear the lyrics until I was older (I was 80% deaf until I was nearly 20) and by then knew I was gay so I saw it the same way.

[equvilantexchgn]

YAY ninjas!!

I'm sure that all my comments about your Naruto fics start like that.

I like this! The rivalry with Gai-sensei and Kakashi-sensei is amusing.

This is a good thing to wake up too, I was taking a nap and just woke up!!

Wonderful! I heart it! YAY KakashiXIruka!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, yes, yay ninjas. Kakashi is just to freakin hot, really, and Iruka ... mmm.

I asked sircheeks21, and he said that the rivalry between Kakashi and Gai is never explained, so I figured I could spell it out myself. I'm glad you like the explanation.

Happy birthday, dear. I'll have a Russel/Ed for you as soon as I can!

[equvilantexchgn]

Thank you! And take your time! I'm sure the boys aren't in a hurry either!

^_~

[mollypocket]

Gai sensei....X_x;;;;

Kakashi...♥ ♥

I love you! So enjoyable! ^_^

[mistr3ssquickly]

I want you to notice that Kakashi keeps his eyes closed the *entire* time he's doing the challenge with Gai ... I don't think I'd be able to keep it "up" if I were Kakashi and I was watching Gai. Ew ew ew.

I'm glad you liked the fic, dear!

[sailormac]

This . . . is hilarious. The tone of the whole contest is just so *macho* . . . and the "eternal rivalry" thing is hilarious. I don't think his students *want* to know where the rivalry came from . ..

And this line *made* the fic.

Of all the men he'd met since the age of fifteen, when he'd realized that he was gay, Maito Gai was the only one who had ever made him wonder if it wouldn't be safer, perhaps, to be straight.

[mistr3ssquickly]

If I were a guy, I'd have competitions like this ALL THE TIME, just because it'd be hilarious. Doesn't mean the guys doing it are gay, either. I mean, Gai's pretty much straight, in my book. Has to be at least bisexual, because he's got a kid.

hahaha, YES! I've met a few people in my time who've made me wonder if perhaps I'd be better off asexual, know what I mean?

Thank you for reading this, hon. I really appreciate you reading my non-fma stuff!!