Princess Tutu, "Burdened 3: Enough," Fakir/Mute, PG-13

[mistr3ssquickly]

Part three of Burdened. This was the first section I wrote; the others just kind of happened, and I spent a good part of my Integrated Arts lecture trying to decide what order I wanted them to go in.

Comments

[lifeinahole27]

"Maybe you’re the milk in the bottom of my heart, Mute. Do you understand that?

No, neither do I."

T_T why do you know the words that make my heart clench? and i can't even explain why they do, they just... do...

this entire things was (admittedly a little confusing) great. the pain and confusion and emotions came out very well.

~Sar

(sorry my comments are short today, i'm devoid of words right now...)

[mistr3ssquickly]

Your comments are wonderful, hon. No one else reads all my stuff, you're totally winning some sort of award.

I'm glad this arc made you angst. It's supposed to induce angst. A LOT of angst. And once you've seen Princess Tutu, you'll get it a lot more, I think.

Thank you for reading me, dear. I'm really glad you enjoyed this arc!

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[anonymous]

oh no one else reads all your stuff, well hun, you've got that wrong, i may not go in perfect order, and i may be starting with only the things i know, but i do read everything, and I love it, it makes me feel, something i usually dont do, at least not from words, there such common things, they never get to me, but the writing you do, and that others do, its amzing how much they can make me feel...im not sure that i like it...

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[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha aw. See, I have no way of knowing if anyone reads me if there are no comments, so it's always surprising to find that someone is reading me, and past my Naruto or FMA stuff.

I'm really glad you like my writing, dear, I really am. Thank you so much for reading me and letting me know that you enjoy it! ^_^

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[anonymous]

anytime, i feel it extreamly nessicary to tell someone something if it has an effect on you, no matter how big or small.

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[mistr3ssquickly]

So often, laziness and apathy prevent that. I'm glad you took the time to tell me what you thought of my writing! *hugs*