Comments | mistr3ssquickly: PW, "The Slow Ascent after the Sharpest Drop: VI," Apollo/Klavier, PG-13

mistr3ssquickly

PW, "The Slow Ascent after the Sharpest Drop: VI," Apollo/Klavier, PG-13

Jun 24, 2008 13:36

I don't have much to say about this chapter beyond my usual whining that it was like pulling teeth to write. Except, it was weird: it felt like pulling teeth, but then when I checked the word-count, I'd gone over 2k, which is what I generally shoot for with each section, so ... maybe it wasn't so bad? Maybe I'm just whiny. This is a very real ( Read more... )

trucy, apollo, phoenix, klavier, fanfiction, kink meme, pg-13, phoenix wright

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vexacious July 11 2008, 01:31:12 UTC

Randomly: I wish they were more detailed, in AJ, about how Klavier felt about his brother being a total douche. Seriously. x-x;;; I mean, you KIND'VE saw his sad expression when he knew the truth, but was in denial, then wasn't anymore, but...Meh, I wanted more. ><~

Love the fic, by the way! <3

(Sorry about the random comment; I was reading some, and it reminded me of how I beat AJ for the second time two days ago, and how much I dislike Kristoph, and, yeah. xD)

mistr3ssquickly July 11 2008, 03:30:06 UTC

Haha, I've never played the game, don't even own a DS. But I imagine it would be incredibly painful for Klavier, having a brother who was a killer, but also having a brother in prison, maybe on death row. I think that'd really pull a person in a lot of different directions, you know?

And personally, I don't mind that they don't tell us in canon how he reacts. Leaves more for the fanfiction and fanart types to embellish. :3

Random comments are always welcome! XD

~m