Kyo Kara Maoh, "In Preparation For, Part IV," Yuuri/OC, Wolfram/OC, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

ZOMG I got around to fulfilling the prompt! And, at that, I only kind of fulfilled it. *shot*

Took three chapters and a prologue to get to it, but who's counting, really? Me!ANYWAY, here it is. I kinda like this chapter. Not as much as the last one, but more than the ones that came before it, if that makes any sense. I hope you like it, too. ^_

Comments

[pollinia]

Oh lord, I love this. I mean, you know. In that really painful way that you do so well. Poor, poor Wolfram. You're making me like him in this nurturing, protective, mommy sort of way and just EWW. ;)

But I like this Sergeant Allen. I want him to stick around and make Wolfram happy. Ditto to trashy human girl. Yuuri would take very good care of a sweet girl, I think. <3

*pines for part 5*

[mistr3ssquickly]

You know, part of what I dislike so strongly about Wolfram, in canon, is that there's no one around to say "Look, you're acting like a brat. Cut it out." 'Cept for that one time when Gwendal's all like TRUTH IN YOUR FACE and I was like D: *epic*

*cough* So I'm acting like a brat too, sue me.

But I'm really glad you liked this, hon! And that it made you feel maternal towards Wolfram. Boy needs it, in this arc. I won't tell you anything about what happens in the last chapter, but I think you'll be pleased with it. Hope so, anyway.

*cuddles*

~m

[pockygirl]

*wibblingliekHELL*
poor poor wolfram! poor poor yuuri's unnamed lover, but oh god wolfram.
unfortunately, wolfram would pobably slap anyone who tried to give him sympathy hugs, on top of being fictional, so i cant hug him like this makes me want to.

also, noble custom are WEIRD.
also-also, i know you're a horny, stupid teen yuuri, but you're also in a high position. think before you act! V_V

goodfic. most definitely [goodfic]

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hee! *snuggles* I agree with you that, where I feel bad for all of them, Wolfram's hurting the worst. Sgt. Allen's not doing so well, either. But yes, Wolfie would probably run you through (not slap you, I think you fall into the Stupid Woman! category, just by virtue of your gender, and slapping means stuff, over there XD) for trying to hug him. XP

Noble customs are weird? Well yeah! Look at what started this mess. A slap in the face. That means you're now engaged?

And when has Yuuri EVER thought before acting? XD

I'm glad you liked the story, hon. Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[smexy_cakes]

My poor wolfie-sniffs-(yes he is mine w/o copyright permission xD) Gah..that girl had to ruin what could be >_<. I hate her >>; I hope there will be hope for Yuuri and wolf .-.;;-crosses fingers xD-

I liked the way you describe their emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^. What ticked me off was that Yuuri didn't even pay attention to Wolf when he was with Sergeant Allen. Wolfie was going crazy and Yuuri didn't even care. Yuuri baka!!!!!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hee! I agree, poor Wolfram. But go easy on that girl ... I don't think she really ruined anything. All she did was fall in love with a guy who fell in love with her, she didn't know he was the Maoh, or that he was engaged. I say poo on Yuuri for that one.

I'm glad you like the emotions in this chapter, hon! Next one's the last of this arc, it should answer all your questions. ^_^

~m

[smexy_cakes]

I just hope its good news for wolfie Dx

[mistr3ssquickly]

It's posted! :D

And yes, it's good news for Wolfram. As far as I consider it, anyway ... XD

~m

[faerie_speak]

*snuggles a Wolfram* Poor prince :( It's STILL uber interesting, and I'm on to read the very very end now. *ker-snugs*

[mistr3ssquickly]

He is a sad little prince, isn't he? I feel bad for him in canon, too ... dun think Yuuri's ever going to be much of a husband to him.

Cheers hon! Next section's up, and it's the finale! ♥

~m