Fullmetal Alchemist, "A Father's Pride and Joy," Nash/Belsio, PG-13

[mistr3ssquickly]

What the hell, this fic's done? But I haven't like ... started it yet.

Have I?

Oh the well. Here it is, in all its foul-mouthed glory. First for 20_inkspots prompt #15, "Sweet and Divine," and where it's kinda short, it was fun to write.

Cheers!

Our contributions for 20_inkspots, in chronological order:

1895: "Holding Back" (#2)
1906: "Dawn for a Dying Man" (#16

Comments

[mistr3ssquickly]

Mmm I do love comments. They give me things to answer when my NaNo's being a FUCKING BITCH. >:E

*cough* Thanks for catching the typo! I fixed it. ^^ And yes, Ed and Russel are idiots. That's what we love about them, isn't it? XD

Thank you for reading, sweeite! ♥

~m

[pockygirl]

i lol'd.
seriously, it's lovely, seeing the interactions and especially watching nash's mental image or russel go boom.

.. there was going to be more here, but it decided to winging off into thin air in favor of 'oooh, sour skittles!"

But i liked this one a lot, not just because it's got ed in it.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Poor Nash. I think he was still stuck with the idea that his son was a child. XD

Glad you liked the story, hon! ♥

~m

[asm613]

Is this fight between Edward and Russ foreplay or a release of yet unrealized sexual tension?

Loved that you had Nash tell Fletch and Al that Nash was just like their older brothers when he was their age.

Still lovin' the story.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, no, this isn't quite foreplay. Close to it, but not quite. It's not written in this arc, but in my mind I had it that Ed and Russel wouldn't be together for about another year after this.

John's getting warmer towards his children, indeed. Telling stories on their father like that ... that's part of Nash's punishment you were wanting earlier. XD

Thank you for reading, sweetie! I'm so glad you liked the story!

~m

[sailormac]

This was *prime* RussellXEd. Trading insults, trading punches, and you just *know* with every swipe they take that they are SO meant for each other. Only Ed can make Russell lose his cool and blow his image as the "perfect son" -- and it's very, very amusing how it ended up being such a rude awakening for his father. ~_^

[mistr3ssquickly]

Haha, yeah. I love their prickly dynamic so much, it's great fun to write. And I don't know where Nash got the idea that his son was well-mannered and sweet ... he must've been out of the room during the "Other Brothers Elric" episodes, huh? XD

Glad you liked, sweetie! ♥

~m