Fullmetal Alchemist, "Keeping Secrets," Belsio/Nash, PG

[mistr3ssquickly]

Now, you've got to understand that I'm a fluffy person, by nature. I like love and happiness and fidelity and holding-hands, not all this depressing deathfic shit I seem to be writing these days. Lots of people know that, among them goldphish_bowlSo when she got me into writing Belsio/Nash, a canon-doomed pairing, there was understandably a misalignment between

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[goldphish_bowl]

Oh wibblewibble. Can I just hug both those poor bastards now? please? And Danny--that sweetheart--they all need some love.

BUT THE HAPPY FAMILY YES <3 SO MUCH LOVE. The semester ends thereabouts on the 24. expect porn and scribbles and love then.

Fic is love. Thank you very, very much.

And while crossdressing can sometimes be hot, JESUS CHRIST Nash put your pants back on XD

[mistr3ssquickly]

Yes, you may certainly hug them because they're both alive now, wtf. Danny really is a sweetheart ... but you know I already adore him. XD

I love you so dearly, hon. Thank you for putting up with my random babblings and romantic nonsense ... and your art! Ah, such an inspiration. *hugs* And porn 'n scribbles sounds VERY nice to me, teeheehee! ♥

*nuzzlecuddlesnug*

~m

PS
Belsio say that crossdressing might be hot on others, but not on his Nash. All the same, that's no reason for him to put his pants back on ... XD

[mistr3ssquickly]

I adore Russel and Fletcher ... really wish they'd been in the anime more. I mean really, it would've made a great story to have them traveling with the Elric brothers, to compare the sacrifies and selfishness of each older brother, and the impact it has on their younger sibs ... *le sigh*

Anyway! I'm really glad you liked this, hon! Thank you so much for reading! ♥

~m

[mistr3ssquickly]

*snickers* Well really, if you think about what happens after the eps where they meet the Tringhams (Scar and the homunculi start chasing them) I somehow doubt sex would be a very high priority. Especially for Fletcher, who's like ... 10.

I think it woulda been better than the crap they gave us post ep 25, anyway. XD

~m

[pockygirl]

I...
CAN"T
BREATHE.

OMGOMGOMGDED
just.. oh dear lord.

not coherent enough to say any more than that, i might write a better critique late, but..

DED.

[mistr3ssquickly]

*giggles and pets* You know, it's funny ... when the notion came to me the Nash would crossdress to hide from the people of Xenotime, I didn't think it was all that funny. More sad than anything else. But now, it does seem to be slaying people. XD

I'm glad it killed you? Come back though, I'll miss you if you're dead. ^_~

♥♥♥

~m

[pockygirl]

I suspect it's the lemon-boobs.

or fletcher calling him 'mommy'

or possibly just people's tendencies to make up stories, and imagining the very masculine and manly nash being told that he was, in the town's eyes, an out of luck prostitute.

it's just all.. oh dear. and being able to click on ' the most masculine woman' and seeing phish's drawing, well, it'ds like metafiction except with more crack!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Poor little Fletcher, he just wanted to play along and keep his daddy safe! He ended up traumatizing everyone for life instead, though. XD And of course Belsio would be thought to take in a prostitute! I mean, who better to do that than the town recluse who's never been out of Xenotime long enough to meet a prostitute? (The townspeople are not only very imaginative, but also very dim.)

*gives phoenix downs and luffles* ♥

~m

[lifeinahole27]

*stares at open closet door and shit piled around with it* that's been sitting there, because i've been sitting here reading this. and i'm so glad i did. IT MAKES EVERYTHING HAPPIER. and the pic of nash in a dress is just great!

*squeezes russ and fletcher* you know i love these boys, right?

[mistr3ssquickly]

Teehee, poor Nash. If we're not killing him, we're putting him in a super butt-ugly dress. The man just can't win. But hey, at least he gets his kids back, in this story?

I'm so glad you liked it, hon! Thanks for reading!

~m

PS
Tringham kids are adorable. Why're they only in 4 eps of the series??? >_< *pout*

[sailormac]

This managed to be cracky and yet poignant and sweet at the same time. It's nice to see Belsio and Nash get *some* kind of a happy ending. And I do love how Russell seems embarassed by the situation, that's adorable! And Danny is sort of "WTF?" and accepting at once. Very, very nice!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Odd, isn't it, how it really IS total crack, but it's not really humorous crack. Really, I think it's cracked-out how many anime characters are orphaned. Are parents really THAT hard to draw? I mean really.

Anyway! I'm glad you liked this, hon. Of all the Muses, which do you think would be the most understanding of this situation, eh? Now we just have to get Danny into one of those dresses ... XD

Thanks for reading! ♥

~m