Comments | mistr3ssquickly: Full Metal Alchemist, "Priorities," Roy/Jean, NC-17

mistr3ssquickly

Full Metal Alchemist, "Priorities," Roy/Jean, NC-17

Apr 24, 2007 18:38

Happy Strip Havoc Naked Day? I didn't even know there was such a day until pockygirl told me about it. Oh well, I managed to porn the big blonde boy before the end of the day, so yatta ( Read more... )

nc-17, breda, fma, roy, fanfiction, al, danny, jean

Comments 26

secretfreaky April 25 2007, 17:46:15 UTC

The blow job was hot enough to ignite Jean's wet clothes...*wipes up drool from desk and off chin* Guh, brain not working...excellent work!!!

mistr3ssquickly April 25 2007, 20:46:25 UTC

Hahahaha! *offers a hanky for drool-cleaning* I'm glad you liked it, hon! Always a good time, writing Roy as a bit of a cockslut. XD

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the lemon story! ♥

~m

havocmangawip April 25 2007, 18:41:06 UTC

Thank you! I can already tell it's going to be a GREAT week.

mistr3ssquickly April 25 2007, 20:47:12 UTC

Mmm, that it shall be. Two down, five more to go! ♥

I'm glad you liked this!

~m

sailormac April 26 2007, 12:46:36 UTC

Hee, hee, Roy's out to get everybody laid, isn't he? I imagine the next people to come in his door dripping wet will be Russell and Ed, and he'll conveniently lend them a nice, private changing space . . .

DAMN hot lemon scene. I'd say this is a great kickoff to Molest Havoc Week.

mistr3ssquickly April 26 2007, 22:51:20 UTC

Roy's got to take care of his little prodigy, now hasn't he? XD Ed's actually missing, still, in this story ... anytime Danny's still assigned to Al, Ed's gone. And Roy!muse say he'd never, EVER do ANYTHING to help "that bean" get laid.

*watches muses start throwing stuff at each other*

I'm glad you liked the lemon story, hon. Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

crystal_lilly April 26 2007, 14:51:51 UTC

Ooooh, a nice light fluffy one that still packs in so much. I love the Roy and Al interactions, and how Roy is just so cute and concerned when he's being all fatherly.

Then the severe contrast of Roy and Jean getting it on in the men's shower room is so fantastic, especially when they themselves mention it (*grin* no talking about the 'kid' during sex is a good rule). I like the visual and written impact from the repitition of Roy's 'priorities'. It definitely works.

Annnnnd Danny is so cute in this one. I can't really tell you why... maybe it is the comedic effect of having Jean and Heymans narrating/joking about what is happening. (I like that part too.)

Definitely a great one. Thanks for sharing it (and this week is starting to look up immensely if more stuff like this is on the way). *hugs you*

mistr3ssquickly April 26 2007, 22:58:13 UTC

Daddy!Roy is one of my all-time favorite things about writing FMA, easily. We see it a little bit in canon, when he shouts at Edward by the river (I want to say ep. 45, but I could be wrong), and you know he'd be the same with Alphonse. I'm glad you like it, hon!

The fact that you like Danny in this just thrills me into tiny little pieces of mistr3ss, really. He's my pet muse, and for someone to like him is just a wonderful thing, for me. Havoc and Breda think he's a moron, but what do they know, right? XD

Thank you so much for reading, hon. I'm always very pleased when you've read my stories, and enjoy your feedback so very much. I hope you like what the rest of the week produces! ♥

~m