Biological

Mar 15, 2004 02:36

Lavinia sits on the bench outside the local Starbs and swallows her antifutureshock meds with a soy chai latte. After a few minutes, she feels able to switch her shades from obstacle-imaging to full vision. The world slowly fades up from green and black wireframe to three-dimensional colour. She gazes blankly over the rail station, at the full- ( Read more... )

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redwolf March 14 2004, 20:20:44 UTC
I've been wondering when the arse milkshake and three-headed frog would make an appearance. Kind of glad they weren't combined.

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radiumx March 15 2004, 00:26:34 UTC
What ass-milkshake? Was this in the news?

(doesn't watch TV because it would spoil the Armageddon Surprise)

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Anal beverages... margoeve March 14 2004, 20:36:22 UTC
It was really only a matter of time, wasn't it?

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Wings theheretic March 14 2004, 20:51:51 UTC
Creepy.

I like it.

Much like Transmet, it has a certain irrepressible ugliness. Your mind is evil.

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hmm... auralfiend March 14 2004, 21:05:04 UTC
I guess I really don't feel the same sense of revulsion as the kid may have. I mean, with all the futureshock crap flying around it really doesn't surprise me that someone would have a winged fetus. And want to commit suicide over it. Nice to see the stuff from diepunyhumans making its way into your writing. Always fascinating to see a writer's interests in action. Muscular rectums of young Algerian girls. Heh heh.

I'd heap praise on you like the rest of the gaggle but you already know the merits of your own work, after all, you posted the thing for the world to see.

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sandmistress March 14 2004, 22:32:05 UTC
Commendable (or should I say, commitable?) incorporation of the ass milkshake.

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