Comments | mistersleepless: STRANGEWAYS

mistersleepless

STRANGEWAYS

Jan 30, 2004 16:00

(I wrote this in the pub today, in about forty minutes. Haven't decided what it is yet. I tend to use this format as the early working draft for comics scripts, so don't be misled by its screenplay/teleplay kind of look. If a second half appears, I'll run it here.)EXT. CITY HALL ( Read more... )

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ironjocelyn January 30 2004, 16:21:14 UTC

I love the bit about the marmoset in the dress. Adds that extra touch of gross.

marinebear January 30 2004, 16:21:17 UTC

call me simple but I loved it :)

spectre13 January 30 2004, 16:30:00 UTC

Ingenious. Sickly hilarious.

Who needs human contact and food when you have such talent and penchant for the abnormal?

I love your writing.

thesheryl January 30 2004, 16:30:08 UTC

I am also a big fan of the haunted feet, heeheehee... It's too bad about you forgetting girls tho. My next user pic will have bare breasts in them.

jester_uk January 30 2004, 16:31:36 UTC

I'm a bisexual polyamant, but that doesn't mean that I'm ever ever going to have sex with you.

A line that's been crying out to be used somewhere for a long time, IMO 8-)

The only email I get is work-related. I have forgotten what girls look like.

Doesn't spam solve both those problems in one go?

Another wonderful piece of work. I'm always amazed by how you paint the picture of what's happening without having to resort to excessive wordage.