A Wonderful Meal

[mister_troper]

Title: A Wonderful Meal
Genre: Poetry
Word Count: 279
Notes: Here.

Comments

[kayden_eidyak]

Oh, how tragic. Lovely, but tragic. Well done!

[mister_troper]

Thanks!

[keppiehed]

I don't typically enjoy rhyming poetry, but this was outstanding. The subject matter was entrancing. I was gripped by tension the more I read until the final line, so all-encompassing. Very grand, so sure, the whole thing was beautiful and terrible. Well done, best of luck to you.

[mister_troper]

Trying to bring rhyme and meter back for poetry is one of my nagging fixations, so I'm much glad to hear that it worked for you.

[fawatson]

Eat what’s for dinner
then eat the host.

Chilling message.

[vyvyan_wilde]

Unlike keppiehed, rhyming poetry is my favorite, and I thought this piece of yours was great. It flowed smoothly, and the powerful ending was very satisfying. Good luck in the polls!

[mister_troper]

*uses secret Order of Frost handshake*

[rephen]

The rhyme was gorgeous and that last stanza really delivered. I love how the feel build up through the poem and the climax was really awesome. I dont usually like poetry, but this one was spectacular. Wonderful work.