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Jan 29, 2006 22:24

Thank you for
making me see
that your not there
and never could be

bc you have other things
on your mind, more important
than excess bagagge, or
even this copper taste

bc you've bitten your tongue again
and not done what you've said
and let the battle begin
bc you've taken all i had.

~BEn

Im writing again too...

but is that good.

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wrapmeinwebs January 30 2006, 15:21:36 UTC
Oh! Very good...I felt that one.

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reeko_punk17 January 30 2006, 21:39:59 UTC
yes

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luvingtohateu January 31 2006, 00:11:29 UTC
not bad at all Ben...i liked it alots!!!

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anonymous January 31 2006, 06:39:07 UTC
too short ben...too bland, spice it.. lead, then stray...take them in then lead them away...keep us guessing...be vague yet specific.

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mistakethis525 January 31 2006, 22:29:05 UTC
WHO are you mystery man/woman...
i hate anonymous posters...

besides... it'll all be gone in 6 days

~BEn

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anonymous February 1 2006, 03:03:55 UTC
dude it's timmy p....and dont disrespect i'll ben you over my knee bitch.....

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