Erase the nightmares: Chapter IV

Sep 05, 2010 22:22

Title: Erase the nightmares: Chapter IV
Author: Me, mistake_arrest 
Beta: The lovely and amazing shayunknown  <3
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13 for now
Warnings: Language, dark themes I guess if you're easily offended?
Summary: AU series. Matthew works as a waiter, and he has recently got out of an abusive relationship. Could Dominic help him get over his fear of falling in ( Read more... )

au, muse slash, erase the nightmares, belldom

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altogingenting September 5 2010, 19:45:00 UTC
Brilliant chapter :D

Of course Matt ordered pasta!

"I might have imagined things, but I could almost swear I felt cold fingertips brushing against the back of my hand right then. They were gone as quickly as they’d emerged, but I could sense that Matt was walking closer to me than before, the sleeve of his jacket touching mine every couple of steps until we finally reached the pub."
Loved that paragrahp :)

And the last line was beautiful

Looking forward to more!

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mistake_arrest September 15 2010, 16:30:01 UTC
Thank you for your comment! :)

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herverylowness September 5 2010, 20:49:11 UTC
Oh so looking forward to more!

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mistake_arrest September 15 2010, 16:30:44 UTC
More to come at some point, I've been help up by real life lately! Thank you for your comment :)

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thekeyholder September 5 2010, 21:06:44 UTC
Hehe, now I'm not late with my reply! :P I loved this chapter so much!

All those little touches were so delicate and cute! It felt like I had butterflies in my stomach!<3 Especially this paragraph was awesome:

I might have imagined things, but I could almost swear I felt cold fingertips brushing against the back of my hand right then. They were gone as quickly as they’d emerged, but I could sense that Matt was walking closer to me than before, the sleeve of his jacket touching mine every couple of steps until we finally reached the pub.

Oi, stupid ex! I thought he would ruin the first date. I'm glad that Dom is honest with Matt and that he realized he'd like more than just sex. Poor Mattie had a nightmare again but Dom's presence is surely soothing!

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mistake_arrest September 15 2010, 16:31:22 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! :)

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absolutionbitch September 5 2010, 21:14:42 UTC
D'awwwwwh, Matty held Dommy's hand :3

So cute!

Can't wait until you write more!

I actually love this story!

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mistake_arrest September 15 2010, 16:32:02 UTC
I'm a sucker for hand-holding :D thanks for commenting!

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unomusette September 5 2010, 21:56:24 UTC
This is such a great read, loved the "tender moment" at the end, where despite everything it's Matt who is making the physical overtures. And Dom hasn't even dressed up properly yet :o

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mistake_arrest September 15 2010, 16:32:27 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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