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missy7280 February 6 2011, 07:54:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

There are just so many possibilities about Arthur and Cobb's background, and I love how the movie leaves it open-ended for us so we can come up with our own ideas. Also I'm happy to hear that the sense of jealousy and tension came through. Your comment really put a smile on my face. Thanks for reading!

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velvetburrs February 6 2011, 03:01:50 UTC
This story was wonderful! Their relationship was so complex but true. Incredible.

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missy7280 February 6 2011, 07:56:20 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy to hear that you liked it. This was a wonderful compliment to receive. :D ♥

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coldthermistor February 7 2011, 11:17:30 UTC
I blame it on life, but I finally got around to reading this. I actually liked the focus on the Arthur-Cobb dynamic, more than on the jobs, and I enjoyed the novel take on the way they relate.(Banter, flirting, oh my! :D)

Grats on clearing the finish line for big bang! And thanks for sharing :)

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missy7280 February 8 2011, 19:09:30 UTC
Oh it's perfectly fine, I'm just glad that you managed to read it! I still need to find time to get to your big bang (which I will, promise! just, you know, school and all that). I wasn't sure if the Arthur-Cobb dynamic would come across the way I wanted it to, so I'm happy that it worked for you and you enjoyed it :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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alexwolfchan February 8 2011, 11:24:31 UTC
This was great, I love how you explore Arthur and Cobb relationship and the back-story was so interesting. Cobb is so flesh out with all his flaws but it not overly dramatic and I like that. Also, Ariadne was great in here.

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missy7280 February 8 2011, 19:17:00 UTC
Thank you! There are so many possibilities for how Arthur and Cobb could have met, and I loved getting to explore that. This fic was my first time writing from Cobb's POV, so I'm really pleased that his character was believable. Thank you for taking the time to review. You really put a smile on my face. ^.^

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wildwordwomyn February 9 2011, 20:47:53 UTC
I really liked this. Liked how you showed Cobb's history with both Mal and Arthur. Liked how confused and scared, and eventually accepting and content, Cobb was. Liked knowing more about Arthur's military background. Most people don't touch on it when they write stories about Arthur and I like hearing about how it might affect his personality. Mostly I liked how vulnerable and open your Cobb was. Great job!

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missy7280 February 11 2011, 05:07:56 UTC
Aww, thank you :) I love the complexities of Cobb's character, so I'm glad that seemed to show through in the story. It was fun exploring their backgrounds, especially the possibility of Arthur's experience in the military. Kind of an Inception-world take on Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. Anyway, now I'm rambling. Thanks for reading and your kind review!

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