Comments | missviolet: FIC: "Not For The World" Jack/Ianto NC-17

missviolet

FIC: "Not For The World" Jack/Ianto NC-17

Jul 28, 2008 12:01

Title: Not For the World

Author: missviolet

Pairing: Jack/Ianto

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Very smutty PWP

Summary: Takes place after that lovely kiss in To The Last Man.

Notes: My first Jack/Ianto fic. Just getting my feet wet here.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to Russell T. Davies, BBC, et. al. No infringement or disrespect intended.

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Comments 23

ace_of_spades6 July 28 2008, 17:16:14 UTC

*IN SHOCK* oh my god...I haven't read this yet because YOU ARE WRITING JACK/IANTO AND IM EXCITED :D

*sorry for that pointless comment, I'm sure it will be amazing, back to comment later*

ace_of_spades6 July 28 2008, 17:38:59 UTC

Just as amazing and hawt as I expected! Really good testing of the waters. Although just so you know, Jack never wears a tie ;)

missviolet July 28 2008, 18:26:26 UTC

Point taken! I removed that line. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!

anonymous July 28 2008, 17:46:33 UTC

It's good, well written smut, but you don't really have Jack's voice down. I can't see him ever calling Ianto 'darling' or 'luscious tart' or using the words 'divine' in regard to fucking. It kind of pulls you out of the fic a bit too much to truly enjoy it. I've read your House/Wilson stuff so I know how good you can be and these are little things that are easily fixed.

missviolet July 28 2008, 18:28:26 UTC

Hm, I guess my Victorian fetish just leaks over into everything I write. I have no problem with Jack using antiquated terms, even though he's from the 51st century, but he did live through Victorian London and no doubt spoke as to blend himself in.

Ah well, it was just an experiment. I am not sure if I'll write Jack/Ianto again but if I do, I probably won't use first-person. I can't take anyone but Jack's perspective, though, because I'm an American and have no idea how a Welshman talks.

missthingsplace July 28 2008, 18:00:42 UTC

Very hot and well written, but i agree with the above about what Jack is calling Ianto.

missviolet July 28 2008, 18:29:20 UTC

Yes, as mentioned above, this was just an experiment and I'm not sure if I can write Jack/Ianto again. I intend to focus more on Holmes/Watson because they mesh so well with my natural narrative voice which is decidely Victorian.

missthingsplace July 28 2008, 19:05:23 UTC

not bothered whether jack would call ianto that or not...this was still incredible :)

missviolet July 28 2008, 19:11:43 UTC

Thanks! It's hard to say what Jack would call Ianto in the throes of passion. We've never seen a real sex scene other than that regrettably short 10 seconds in the terrarium when Gwen interrupts them. I think the main objection was that he's not perceived as a tender, affectionate lover who would use terms like 'darling' and 'sweetheart' and for whatever reason, that's how I see him, especially after the romantic conversation in To The Last Man, in which, from my slash perspective, he admitted that he loves Ianto.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the feedback.

itoshii_chan July 28 2008, 19:29:37 UTC

Just getting my feet wet here.

Oh you can get your feet wet here anytime! *devilish grin*

So hot and sexy, utterly gorgeous!! You have such a way with words... totally delicious!

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I hope you decide to write more Janto in the future!

missviolet July 28 2008, 19:57:53 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I adore the Jack/Ianto pairing, though I'm not sure if Jack's point-of-view comes naturally to me and being an American, I don't think I can write from Ianto's point-of-view. But maybe I'll try third-person Jack/Ianto next time. I do think I'll try again with these two, they're such a delicious pair.