No Place To Run.

[missundaztood11]

No Place To Run

Setting: An old cemetery on a dark cloudy day in 2006.

Stephanie’s Mother: (crying) It’s a shame to think that she’s gone. What did we ever do wrong?

Stephanie’s Stepfather: (comforts her) I don’t know honey. Maybe it was her friends. Maybe they influenced her.

Stephanie’s Mother: Bob…she didn’t have any friends…except for

Comments

[missundaztood11]

YOU
(kinda)
WROTE
IT.

hehe. thank you soo much for your help!

[notxsoinnocent]

omg i love itt!!!!!!!

this is seriously your hidden talent!! i think u should make it longer though & add some more interesting scenes thatd be amazing!!♥

[missundaztood11]

haha thanxs dani! wo0t. okay, so longer and more dialogue? or more what? what else does it need? others say it's predictable and others say it's too abrupt...confusing!

[notxsoinnocent]

no the scenes u have now are fine but u should definitely make it longer!!! cuz its really good

* maybe even add a flashback?
=]♥

[missundaztood11]

lol...the whole thing is a flashback. =D thanxs again!
btw, at first i thought your icon was a belt buckle...oh well!

[x_euphoriax]

who wait you wrote this???
i thought you just found it somewhere or something
haha
wow
its reallly good

[missundaztood11]

lol yeah i wrote it for my drama class.

thanxs sally.

[yayyy_kat]

add it.