Discover Something Beautiful

[missninjastar]

Title: Discover Something Beautiful
Author: missninjastar
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
Rating: PG idk i've never rated stuff before omg
Summary: They both know as soon as one of them moves a spell will be broken, and everything they've worked so hard for will dissolve around them.
Content/Warning: Some strong language but that's about it. Oh and it's sad.
Disclaimer: Don't

Comments

[uruguayanross]

wow okay im crying a lot now because this is literally happening to me in real life right now as im reading except this would be the other persons POV but yeah this is beautiful well done <3

[missninjastar]

oh god it sucks that you're upset and that this is happening to you but thank you so much<3

[bookxbutterfly]

fuck, ouch. that was absolutely beautiful. and heart-breaking. amazing. -wipes tears-

I miss Ryden. so much. -sigh-

[missninjastar]

i know man, i miss ryden too. :(
but thank you!<3

[othercrazything]

wow, that was good. Haven't read good true-to-life Ryden stories for ages... this is short but very accurate... lifewise. Thanks for that! =)

[othercrazything]

uh, there's a couple of typos like:
"It hurts me more then you" - I guess here should be than?
and
"We we’re young and confused" - double We?
=)

[missninjastar]

thank you for pointing those out! i wrote this a while a go now, so i (like to think) i've improved on making silly mistakes like that. i'll correct those :)
but thank you! i usually hate reading stuff like this but i tend to write like it a lot and bum myself out, especially with this one. whenever i reread it it makes me sad :( but i'm glad you liked it! :)

[othercrazything]

\0/

[othercrazything]

hey, may I translate that into Russian, please?