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[missmara]

Short ficlet, based on one of the pics from my image prompt table/gallery (I'm gonna make smaller sized versions and actually make a table for them sometime soon) images. It's still very open ended and feels somewhat unfinished, but I like the universe enough I may go back to it eventually

Comments

[katwoman76]

I don't like the way you wrote Sandy in this, but apart from that I really enjoyed this.

[nullsys]

Great fic and I really hope that you'll write more for this universe. I think it has a lot of potential and I'd like to know, how the Cohens could abandon Ryan like they did and if there is any chance for reconciliation.

[jujuberry136]

I'd love to see Sandy and the rest of the Cohens try to justify their behavior to Julie and company. I'm also praying that there is more of a rationale than simply "Ryan's insensitive, let's cut him out of our life."

Anyway, really liked the story. It raises some fun questions, so I hope you'll keep writing in this 'verse!

Thanks for sharing :D

[60schic]

I like it. I was prepared for venom from Kaitlin and Julie, but you made it work. If you continue/revisit, I'd love to see how badly the Cohens now feel since the Cooper women have embraced Ryan and Trey, and there is still bad blood between the Cohens and Ryan. How Ryan still holds it against them and they still can't understand how Ryan chose Trey over them (or something like that)

[alluxera]

I like it. Ryan once more has to take care for someone.