Comments | misskittye: This is still a WIP, but less so

misskittye

This is still a WIP, but less so

Mar 18, 2010 00:18

Because it has 17 18 MORE sentences about Joe/Garbo. Anyway, I actually really liked the results of yesterday's exercise so I thought I'd play around with that again.

liminalliz offered a tip for better enjoyment: imagine Garbo is Demi. Or in blackwayfarer's case, Dhen ( Read more... )

fic, have you pondered joe/____?, whining about fic

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jennerose March 18 2010, 06:11:29 UTC

Man, it sounds like he REALLY LIKES THIS GUY.

Heh.

Also, I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY.

misskittye March 18 2010, 13:14:46 UTC

Hahaha, I'm thinking maybe inserting some drama is going to be the only thing to make this story more interesting.

Joe is going to take Garbo out for a nice seafood dinner and then NEVER CALL HIM AGAIN.

liminalliz March 18 2010, 13:14:28 UTC

Hey wait, this isn't that robot fic we were talking about.

BUT IN ALL SERIOUSNESS, OH MAN THIS IS GREAT <3 MAAAAAAAKEOUTS.

Right as I was reading the kiss, my phone alarm went off and it's Nick singing CONSPIRACY THEORY and so Nick's Jealousy OTP added some extra color to this fic. JSYK.

misskittye March 18 2010, 13:19:19 UTC

Robotfiiiiiiiiiiic. I mean, part of me agrees that this will obviously be the best idea ever, but there's another part that goes ...what's the plot? Other than Nick coolly and calmly leading the robot uprising to cast off their Disney Corp oppressors?

Maaaaaake outs. God, Lizzen, they should make out and then go shopping all while on camera (maybe in Living the Dream?!?!?)

All possible Nicks in all possible timelines are jealous of Joe's attention. The Nick in this verse is probably pouting about the fact that Joe hasn't called him in a WHOLE DAY.

liminalliz March 18 2010, 14:56:23 UTC

Nick coolly and calmly leading the robot uprising to cast off their Disney Corp oppressors
nnnnnghhhhhh stop teasing me

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

<3333

misskittye March 18 2010, 15:41:14 UTC

OMG I just got an idea. What if the Zac!Bot was ordered to be with the Vanessa!Bot for marketability while the poor little Kevin!Bot pined! Hahaha, and then they could have a total this (http://artfiles.art.com/5/ncr/p/LRG/27/2759/WM4TD00Z/victor-jorgensen-us-sailor-bending-young-nurse-over-his-arm-to-give-her-passionate-kiss-in-middle-of-times-square.jpg) moment when Nick finally topples the statue of Walt Disney.

...Someone is bored at work today.

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jazzish March 18 2010, 13:14:28 UTC

This is such a cool technique. And I like what came out of it! Joe/Garbo is just such a pretty image. And I have to say, imagining Demi with her arm around Joe, being all protective, is pretty hilarious.

misskittye March 18 2010, 13:23:26 UTC

Hahaha, maybe that should be imagine Garbo is Joe and Joe is Demi. Bahahaha. It's complicated.

Joe and Garbo are 1% canon interactions and 99% omfg they're so PRETTY! Because OMFG they're so pretty.

jazzish March 18 2010, 13:17:37 UTC

(Haha, I like how there was only one comment when I went to reply, and then I did and suddenly there were four. MAGIC.)

misskittye March 18 2010, 13:25:37 UTC

Actually the same thing happened to me. I was replying to jennerose and then BAM two other comments. Like LJ was suckerpunching me.

smithereen March 20 2010, 02:11:15 UTC

I love the images in this. Garbo leaning against the counter. And Garbo's hand on Joe's waist. And Garbo shushing Joe and then realizing that he's the one making the sounds. So pretty.

misskittye March 23 2010, 14:12:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I have to confess though I don't really know what to do with this. I mean, right now it's just an exercise in "OMFG PRETTY" but as far as a plot or tension or resolution I'm stumped. Like I guess Garbo should do they, "Uhhhh, I'm overwhelmed and will now pull away" bit, while Joe sets himself to convincing Garbo that boy-kissing is in fact awesome, but it's so boring!

Perhaps the next sentence should be, "Suddenly a ninja burst through the window!"