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missj0nes

One-shot: Two Weeks - Sawyer/Juliet

Mar 09, 2009 19:33

Title: Two Weeks
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for 5x08
Word count: 1866
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost
Summary: It has been two weeks since Sawyer and Juliet’s talk on the pier, and a decision has to be made.

Author's note: A HUGE thank you to bluelittlegirl for being such an amazing beta! She gets full credit for passing on the ( Read more... )

fic: sawyer/juliet, sawyer, juliet

Comments 9

afishwithawish March 9 2009, 21:46:29 UTC

Lovely!!!! Just lovely!!!! Juliet & James = Pefection! <3 Thank you for writing this! ^^

missj0nes March 12 2009, 10:41:05 UTC

You're very welcome. Thank you for reading ^^

bluelittlegirl March 9 2009, 23:41:27 UTC

All I did was polish. That's it.
Actually, I cannot take credit for the Hemingway reference - it was suggested by candylandgal but it resonated so much with me that I had to pass it to you. I also love what you have done with it - the rejoinder by Juliet was so perfectly in character.
I love the story, and I look forward to reading more.

"LaFleur" was disappointingly incomplete, so I am very happy that some of the lines could be filled with your story.

missj0nes March 12 2009, 10:44:21 UTC

You're very good at polishing, and I appreciate your help :)
I'll add candylandgal to the A/N then - happy the rejoinder worked.

Maybe we'll hear more about their relationship later on? I certainly hope so.

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missj0nes March 26 2009, 19:06:12 UTC

Aw, thanks hon. Glad you liked it :)

flyawaykatiee June 13 2009, 15:44:59 UTC

Awwh, that was great! :)
I loved the grinning bit at the end, hehe, he's so cute ;P

“You’re not Kate.”
Taken aback she studied him with her shimmering blue eyes.
“Well, you’re not Jack,” was her rejoinder. - I loved that bit. Probably because I'm still a Sawyer/Kate girl, I just think S/J are super cute tooo <3

missj0nes June 14 2009, 18:41:30 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you like it :)
And yes, Sawyer is the master of grinning. Those dimples! ;)

Probably because I'm still a Sawyer/Kate girl, I just think S/J are super cute tooo <3
I guess Sawyer's line kind of gives away the fact that my OTP is Sawyer/Kate :P But then, Juliet and Sawyer didn't bother me at all despite that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing ^^

dess_xo June 10 2010, 18:27:41 UTC

aahw I liked it!
[i]Grinning inanely like a teenage boy, he closed the door as she disappeared around the corner[i/] that was just so sweet!
xo

missj0nes June 11 2010, 06:18:03 UTC

Glad you liked it, and thanks for reading :)