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When rules change, Chapter 1 part B

Apr 04, 2012 01:20

Title: when rules change (working title!)
Author: MissisJoker
Warnings: bad grammar XD
Fill for the prompt from my dear accomplice

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loki, norse!kink, thor, coulson

Comments 4

vardek April 4 2012, 09:20:53 UTC

Best morning ever!!! I loooove how this story continues, how Loki and Steve are slowly becoming friends. And the double point of view: from midgardian's and from loki's perspective - this makes everything so much clearer.
Great update! Thanks a lot and I will be desperately waiting for more.

french_noodles April 4 2012, 09:53:23 UTC

"The humans never seized to surprise Loki."

never ceased to surprise

There's more but this bugged me the most.

cancerjanus April 4 2012, 14:36:24 UTC

So Loki is able to win over females, both young and old. I am very happy that Loki and Steve are now friends.

missisjoker April 4 2012, 15:27:18 UTC

Thank you all!!!
Vardek- yeah, I know this part turned out to be a bit long with all this musings, but I felt like I had to give some sort of "explanation" to the mission from both perspectives.

Cancerjanus- of course! Loki is able to win over all females no matter their age and most of males too! It's Loki after all XD

French_noodles- oh, thanks for telling!
I saw it and I cried XD
It is so hard to find mistakes even obvious ones in my own text cause I've seen it like hundreds of times...Correcting now!!!