Departure & Arrival - Part 5

[missdmonsoon]

See prologue for disclaimer, summary etc.
Rating: PG (snooze, I know, but they are on a plane with a kid)

HOUR 4

Comments

[takethisstep]

Damn you! I want more and you've left me with such a delicious cliff-hanger! I love what you've done here, and seriously, am sitting on the edge of my seating waiting for the next chapter. :)

You're very talented!

[missdmonsoon]

Next part will be up tomorrow, working on it right now. It's part 7 that's giving me hassel.

And thank you for your compliments. It really is lovely when people take the time to comment.

[amles80]

Oh, WOW. This is my favourite work in progress right now! :D

[missdmonsoon]

Oh thank you :) That's quite the boost.

[supermandy13]

I'm really enjoying this story! Charlie is adorable and Miranda is positively laid-back! It's a bit odd, but a kinder, gentler Miranda makes me giggle and melt all at the same time for some reason. :) I'm looking forward to seeing how things pan out!

[tanama31]

omg excellent update i never even expected this twist but i'm loving it. the emotional back story regarding andy's pregnancy and her sisters suicide it was felt. i can't wait for more plz update soon

[worst_liar_ever]

well! She is a designer. I wasn't expecting that. Charlie is too cute for words.