Comments | missdeviant: fic. seriously. i'm not kidding.

missdeviant

fic. seriously. i'm not kidding.

Oct 19, 2004 12:09

I haven't written in three months. I don't love this, it feels rather empty (then again, when do I love anything I write?) but I guess it's a step in the right direction.

This was supposed to be a part of something else, but then it wasn’t, although it might be again.

( A Curious Life. 684 words. Seth/Luke, Seth/Ryan. But not quite. )

fic, the oc fic, the oc

Comments 11

lalejandra October 19 2004, 10:36:54 UTC

WAAAAAAAH!!!!

This feels hollow to you because the characters are hollow. How can they not be? Seth is like a shell, like ziti without marinara sauce, like a matzoh ball without soup, like Summer without lipgloss. Poor baby.

missdeviant October 19 2004, 19:47:38 UTC

They are poor, poor babies who just need some LOOOOOVE!!!!

November 4, where are you?

lalejandra October 19 2004, 19:54:47 UTC

so so so so so far away

*is mournful*

callmesandy October 19 2004, 10:45:30 UTC

I don't think it's bad AT ALL. I love the last line. I love this: It was sort of like when Luke used to call Seth “queer” - he didn’t really like it, but at the same time, he couldn’t help but feel it was right. Liked very very much.

missdeviant October 19 2004, 19:49:23 UTC

It's strange, but you picked out the line that I started with - the line that made me say, "Seth/Luke. Huh."

I'm glad you liked it. I may explore more of my Neutral Milk Hotel world yet.

shoshannagold October 19 2004, 22:28:52 UTC

Fic! Yay!

Good fic! Double yay!

(I know. I'll have more coherent feedback/love in May, okay?)

missdeviant October 20 2004, 07:44:36 UTC

Pshaw. I don't need feedback. I just need to know that I haven't lost my muse altogether. And Yay! I haven't!

shelbecat October 20 2004, 05:19:05 UTC

*sigh*

I don't care what it is - YOU WROTE FIC!!! I do love the Seth!Angst. And you do it so well. Nice.

missdeviant October 20 2004, 07:43:30 UTC

If I hadn't been involved in such a long drought, I don't know if I would have even POSTED this! Since it's maybe a part of something else and all.

But I do it all for people like you. ;) (esp. for the kitten, because I know the kitten loves gay subtext.)

serialkarma October 20 2004, 09:49:27 UTC

I have missed your OC fic!

It was sort of like when Luke used to call Seth “queer” - he didn’t really like it, but at the same time, he couldn’t help but feel it was right.

I think you have summed up how you feel about your story right here, you know.*g*

missdeviant October 20 2004, 20:23:41 UTC

I think you have summed up how you feel about your story right here, you know.*g*

Maybe you're right. But I'm still crying for myself as I write. Seth/Luke? Seth/LUKE????

This is what a six-month hiatus does to people.