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nvgvup May 6 2011, 16:34:44 UTC
So beautiful. Every chapter of this story has been exquisite so it really shouldn't surprise me when each new one is even more so! Thank you for continuing this series. You write Charles and Laura so well - their desires and doubts, their humour, the conservativeness of the time period and the blossoming of their love and trust.

The imagery in this chapter is especially wonderful. I could feel the romantic mood of the hollows under the starry night sky - the gentle breeze in the grass and the silvery magic of the river. A beautifully written haven for their respite.

Waiting for chapter 18!

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missbevcrusher May 6 2011, 16:45:06 UTC
Wow, thank you for the kind comment.

While I've been slow to write this story, it's important to me that I finish it. And so to know that readers are still enjoying makes it all the more worthwhile for me. So thanks a lot for coming back to this story and leaving such wonderful feedback. It brought a smile to my face and brightened my day.

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sczep84 May 6 2011, 16:47:57 UTC
*squeee* They're engaged!! About time *happy sigh* Loved this chapter!!

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missbevcrusher May 6 2011, 17:25:54 UTC
*giggle*

About time

I know right. lol ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. :-)

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katamarann May 6 2011, 16:48:25 UTC
This fic makes me feel....feelings. I'm a blubbering mess right now. How you managed to make the ebb and flow and eventual halting of their near lovemaking even more sensual than if they'd gone all the way? Ugh. You have my admiration. Golf clap.

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missbevcrusher May 6 2011, 17:27:37 UTC
Gosh, I'm like blushing now.

Thanks! :-D

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katamarann May 6 2011, 18:49:52 UTC
Blushing? You should have seen me as I covertly read this on my phone at work, while coworkers were wondering what I was so interested in. I was like "History! Turn of the century stuff. Go away."

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zaleti May 7 2011, 08:12:54 UTC
OMG. Awesome chapter. Loooove the almost-but -not-quite. GUH. :D

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missbevcrusher May 7 2011, 13:13:35 UTC
Thank you, my friend. :-D

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lindy999 May 7 2011, 14:58:40 UTC
Oh God this was so sweet. I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw that you posted. It was a spectacular chapter. Of course I fell like I need a cold shower now but the ending just made me feel all kinds of happy inside.

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missbevcrusher May 7 2011, 18:45:32 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind comment. I'm totally thrilled you enjoyed this chapter and thought it was cold shower worthy. :-D Mission accomplished! hehe

As for feeling all kinds of happy inside, it makes me smile to know that the ending had that effect.

Thanks again. For reading and commenting. It means a lot.

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