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larsfarm77 February 5 2011, 18:40:02 UTC
Love visiting this place; your writing is always so smooth and it fits with the genre so well. And i do love teasing, especially when I know it will eventually lead somewhere great :)

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missbevcrusher February 5 2011, 22:34:56 UTC
Thank you for the kind comment. It makes me smile to know you enjoyed the chapter. :-)

As for the next part, I've already started writing it. Hopefully it'll be up sooner rather than later. *fingers crossed*

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dreamaway78 February 5 2011, 20:40:00 UTC
I really love this story, and I so happy to see an update.

I love how lovely the story is written and how it flows so prefectly.

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missbevcrusher February 5 2011, 22:36:33 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words. It makes me happy to know you've been enjoying the story so far. :-)

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zillard February 6 2011, 04:37:33 UTC
I don't care how long in-between updates, just keep writing like this!! :)

I could hear the music, see the lanterns, feel the anticipation and nervous energy... And I'm really enjoying the original characters, how you're slowly fleshing them out, etc. I think it greatly enriches the story.

Ok so I do care a little bit how far apart updates are, lol... Can't wait for the next part!! (and neither can they!)

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missbevcrusher February 6 2011, 13:03:54 UTC
Wow. Thank you. Your comment totally brought a smile to my face this morning. I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story. I've been having so much fun writing this fic. It's nice to be able to share it.

Thanks again. For reading and commenting. I've already started the next part. :-)

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sira01 February 6 2011, 16:32:22 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.... how much perfect could a chapt be? *dreamy sigh*
I loved their daydreaming, the way they couldn't think of anything else than each other. And the dancing... *shippy squee*
The cutest moment was when Charles misunderstood Laura though. What a gentleman. :D

Honestly, I loooooooved every second of it. It was a treat to read. Thank you so much for this!

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missbevcrusher February 6 2011, 17:40:51 UTC
Awww, you're too sweet, honey. I'm the one who should thank you for being so kind. Your comment brought a smile to my face. It really did. *hugs* :-)

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sira01 February 6 2011, 17:55:53 UTC
You should have see me squeeing when I found the chapter yesterday. I refrained so I would read it when I'm nicely relaxed. It was such a treat and the anticipation just... awwwww...

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missbevcrusher February 6 2011, 18:01:54 UTC
I often do that, too. Hence the reason why I'm always late catching up.

There's nothing like relaxed quiet time for reading. Yesterday, when I read your fic, I was on my rocking chair, a fleece blanket over my PJs, with a cup of tea beside me.

It. was. heaven. :-D ♥

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flamingo55 February 6 2011, 19:52:05 UTC
So glad to see this updated! I always love visiting this story, and there was much to adore in this part...especially the dancing. Mmmm. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Not as much as Charles and Laura, but still. :)

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missbevcrusher February 6 2011, 20:01:14 UTC
Charles and Laura aren't too pleased with my cliffhanger. I can hear their shoes tapping with annoyed impatience. lol

Seriously though, thank you for coming back to this and commenting. That always brings a smile to my face.

As for the next part, I've already started writing it. Hopefully, it'll be up before long. *fingers crossed*

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