Charles/Laura fic, 'Argentia' (complete)

[missbevcrusher]

Argentia
By Missbevcrusher

Rated [T]

Synopsis: Several years after they were first married, Charles and Laura enjoy an evening on the high seas.

Story notes: After a rather stressful two days, I decided I had to flex my creative muscles and tackle a short story. The way I went about it was this: I took a random book from my bookcase and I closed my

Comments

[tayryn]

you're very welcome, darlin.

i very much enjoyed this. i love that they're off together... that they've been married for several years... that they're on water...

i just love the whole romantic feel of it.

and...

When he leaned closer and whispered in her ear-saying beautiful and tantalizing things-a delightful shiver ran down the length of her spine. Her eyelids fell shut.

Even after all these years, her heart still leapt whenever they were like this. It was a testament, not only to their unwavering bond, but to the enduring fire between them.

The ship rocked gently, once, twice, and three times. Then, still breathless, Laura looked to his face and met his eyes.

i REALLY LOVE this moment! made my heart skip a beat, and the whole ficlet left me with a big goofy smile on my face!!

[missbevcrusher]

Thank you. You're incredibly sweet. It makes me smile to know that you enjoyed this little writing experiment. *hugs* Thanks again for beta reading. It was greatly appreciated.

[larsfarm77]

This was lovely, such a calm yet vividly painted scene. You have a wonderful way with these characters.

So great to see you back writing, and the result was beauitufl.

[missbevcrusher]

Thank you so much for the kind comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :-)

[sassyalyce]

That was very sweet, I loved it. Great job!!

[missbevcrusher]

Thank you for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed this little story. Writing it was rather therapeutic for me.

[kosmikdawg]

Such a sweet scene. Loved her talking about her father.

♥

[missbevcrusher]

Thanks, hon. It makes me smile to know that you enjoyed the story including that bit where she talked about her father. Again, thank you for the kind comment. It means a lot.

[somadanne]

What a lovely scene. I could see them so vividly on the ship. I really like how you placed this years after they were married and tied it back to Laura's grandparents.

[missbevcrusher]

Wow. Thank you so much. It's awesome to get kind feedback like this. I'm really glad you enjoyed this little story. It felt nice to be writing again.