Charles/Laura fic, chapter 14 'Through Time & Seasons'

[missbevcrusher]

Comments

[larsfarm77]

I love the pace to this, the sleepy sexiness to everything, even the descriptions of the town. It's like falling into another world to read.

You want to know something?” Laura asked quietly after a time. “When I’m alone at night… I miss you like crazy too.”

Loved this, especially how forward it is -- it feels right.

[missbevcrusher]

Thank you. It makes me smile to know you enjoyed the pace of this. And I'm rather thrilled you liked that line from Laura too. I guess I could just hear her saying that.

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment. And most of all, thanks for being so patient.

[sczep84]

I know I've told u this before but I cannot help but repeat: I love ur writing style. It's almost lyrical and SO incredibly beautiful. I love the imagery u use, the phrases...

I'm so happy u updated again! This made my day!! :D

[missbevcrusher]

Thank you so much for the kind words, and most of all, for hanging in there after all this time. I truly appreciate it.

[missbevcrusher]

*hugs* Thanks for the awesome comment, hon. I'm so glad you enjoyed this part. I'm gonna work hard to post the next part within the week. :-)

[angeltrisha9]

*puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrr* That was just perfect and lovely, like that space between a good dream and awake in winter when you,re all warm. Yeah, this is it.

I love that she's getting somewhat bold, I love that they,re working together, that they're loving together. It's amaing. It's perfect. :D

[missbevcrusher]

Awwww, thanks babybelle. (Yes, I do enjoy stealing your ideas for nicknames lol)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm gonna try to finish the next one within the next few days. I'm almost finished.

[zillard]

Wooooo-hooooooooooooooo!! So excited to see another chapter! I love getting lost in this world, from the very first sentence. You manage to move the plot along while still taking time for these little moments. Such a pleasure to read. Thanks for this!! I especially loved the fellas at work teasing him, them getting ink on their fingers, watching baseball together, and how he mentions the future/his past life once in awhile. As well as their yearning to be together and the impossibility of that in this time. It's all just so REAL. And another chapter in a few days??? Yesssssssss...

[missbevcrusher]

Wow, thanks for the awesome comment. *blush* I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story. I'm gonna work hard to wrap up the next part and post it real soon. I'm almost finished with it.