Ahhh, staying in on a saturday night cause my credit card is froze . . . .

[missbess]

So in my procrastination from research I have been writing fanfiction. I am usually pretty shy about letting other people read it cause its usually written just to scratch my itches, BUT I really liked this one I wrote for Indiana Jones (man, a man with stubble like that should be illegal!!) So, heres my unveiling . . .

Comments

[bruteart]

I got as far as 'miss campbell' and spat my teeth at the screen. Will return for proper comment later.

[missbess]

SQUEEK!!!! Oops, I forgot I posted that, I am to embarrassed to read it again . . . I start so many fics and never finish them, I think this was one of the rare finished ones, totally not beta'd but oh well . . . (am blushing behind hands, oh dear)

[bruteart]

hehehehe! Gotcha~! I did finish reading it just now-- but it doesn't feel quite *finished* to me. Yeah, we know the back story and it makes sense, but as a piece of writing it could use a bit more... something? Is it set some years after Last Crusade? or in between the three early movies?
I should return the favour and send you some of mine, but I know you're kind of swamped at the moment (as am I), so I will refrain.

[missbess]

LOL, yeah I think I set it after last crusade, but who knows really . . . I was brave enough and reread it, not bad, but could have used a beta. Well, send me some of yours when you can, I do understand the busy, BUT I am nearly 10,000 words into my exegesis, WOO HOO!! Its due in four and a half weeks, so no stressing . . . yet.