Fic Four Times it was Allergies and One Time it Wasn't (SPN)

[missbayliss]

Prompt: Sam and/or Dean. Five times it was just allergies and one time it wasn’t.

For some reason I read it wrong and thought it was meant to be five times in toto. My bad!

1.

“Urrrrgh, Saaam,” Dean groaned, scrubbing his nose forcefully with the palm of his hand.
“How is this my fault!?” Sam asked incredulously, holding his hands out by his

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[tarotgal]

Heading to bed, like, an hour ago. But just wanted to say how much I adore this! Proper feedback when I'm awake enough to do so. But I love it. Especially BOTH the "son of a..." followed by sneezes. Guh. This was perfect; no worries about the extra part! I have that same problem when I start to write 5 times/1 times fics; I often think it should be 5 sections total too!

Guh--that last part, especially! So good. And poor itchy, sneezy allergic Dean...

[sierraplaid]

lol, Sam is so grumpy in number 1. I love the "muttered with no sympathy" and "That wanted to interview the victim? Yeah, Dean. I did want to interview the victim in a case that you made us take.”

In no. 2:
“Heh’TSSTCH! Dond’t deed… hhh… Benadryl - Huh’PSCHT!... I’ve beed… hhh… doig fide without it.”
Oh, Dean, that's... doubtful.

“Huh’PTSSHH! EH’TSCXT! Urgh… dorbally dnot this bad though.”
Sam sighed, “That’s because you take the Benadryl.”
Your Sam is on point in this whole fic.

Also, yyyyeaaa towel sneezes in number 5. woop woop!

You're awesome. I guess I'll forgive you that this is "missing" one part. :)