Fic: Gimme Shelter (SPN)

[missbayliss]

Prompt: Every morning for five days in a row, Dean wakes up feeling *kinda* like he might be coming down with something. His throat is *kinda* sore; he’s *kinda* sneezy with like pre-cold sneezes; he feels *kinda* run-down and low-energy. But by each afternoon he’s feeling okay, so he’s not really sick. After almost a week of this, he’s getting

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[tarotgal]

Such a great fill for this prompt! I loved watching him feel kinda icky and get better over and over each day (I'm sure that nap in history class helped) until it finally hit and Dean just COULDN'T any more.

Love the Dean & Sam interactions, especially bits like this:
“Alright, bedtime, small fry,” Dean says, giving his brother a playful shove.
Sam scoffs and looks at Dean, “Small fry? One day I’m gonna be taller than you.”
“As if,” Dean laughs

Absolutely adored the description here of him sneezing into his shoulder and staying that way as more sneezes hit:
“Huh’TSCHT!” he twists and sneezes into his shoulder.
“Bless you,” comes Sam’s sleepy voice from behind him.
Dean stays with his face pressing into his shoulder because he’s not done yet.
“Heh’KSCCHHT! Hhh’CHEWwuh!”

The phone call with Sam talking to John and Dean analyzing it is magnificent.

So is this line: Sam looks up at him with concerned eyes, a look that weighs too much for how young he is. But Sam getting Dean to give in and lie down is precious. And the banter at the

[missbayliss]

Yay! Thank you! ^.^
So glad you liked it :)

(Teenchesters was a first for me but I thought it'd be a nice element in this story)
Thanks for your constant encouragement! xx