Comments | miss_sanguine: "Remember, Patrick, flatter the customer; make him feel good."

miss_sanguine

"Remember, Patrick, flatter the customer; make him feel good."

Apr 27, 2011 20:16

First, an update!

( The update! )

Comments 3

somniumweb April 28 2011, 20:23:14 UTC

Hm, well, I want to leave something because I know when I type "constructive criticism is welcome" I mean it. From what I've read of your fics, I think that you write very clearly and neatly. It helps the flow of the story follow through. It's easy to understand without verging on too simple. Does that make sense? Hmmm... Maybe not "easy to understand". It helps visualize the events better. I think that's it. I don't think I've read enough yet to say anything about where you could improve.

Ooooh, the way those birds are dancing... ! Are they singing about Rio as in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil? Because that dancing and music reminds me of the famous carnivals that happen there. And they have tropical rainforest. Hm. Maybe I should see the movie. Aha, and when the birdy started unconsciously shaking its tail feathers to the music - that actually happens to me a lot. XD

miss_sanguine April 29 2011, 06:12:43 UTC

Thank you so much for the review. <3

They are singing about Rio de Janeiro, Brazil--it's the main setting of the movie. A carnival of which you speak is in it, too. xD It's one of the main themes.

You should go see the movie! It's awesome! And baby Blu is soooo cute. <3333333 I squealed in theaters when I saw him.

amanda_violet May 1 2011, 18:11:05 UTC

I absolutely love your Sokka and Zuko bromance. Especially in that one story where they were all hungover and wearing dresses and they had no idea how they got that way, and they were trying to sneak back in the house before they got caught (especially by Mai). Sokka and Zuko have such great BFF chemistry in canon, and you just took it and made it awesome. I also like your Maiko stuff. Because Maiko is the best, obvs.

OH HEY I RECOGNIZE THAT MOVIE.