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miss_porcupine

Freezer Burn (39/?)

Jan 04, 2013 13:12

Freezer Burn
Genfic; PG-13-ish
Avengers/Captain America ensemble
previous parts | ao3

( Steve, Clint, Bruce, Tony; 2700 words )

a pre-crisis girl in a post-crisis world, serial_fb, fic

Comments 5

lillian13 January 4 2013, 18:28:27 UTC

Someday I am coming to NYC and you are Feeding Me All the Foodz.

miss_porcupine January 4 2013, 20:09:07 UTC

Xi'an Famous Foods. The lamb noodles alone are worth the trip. :)

persephone_kore January 7 2013, 00:47:58 UTC

I can't really do hot foods, but you manage to make them sound appealing. *g*

bratfarrar January 7 2013, 18:23:53 UTC

This is a really good example of how to not-info-dump: lots of info, but the characters are being so much themselves that the reader doesn't notice until they start to construct a comment on it (or at least, this reader).

miss_porcupine January 8 2013, 19:22:26 UTC

I think the barf cannon works as an excellent distraction. :)