Comments | miss_porcupine: Prodigal, part nine

miss_porcupine

Prodigal, part nine

Mar 21, 2009 14:58

serial_p, ncis, sg-1, sga

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4thdixiechick March 21 2009, 19:50:29 UTC

Dang - I kinda wish Abby was around for Lorne's glowy-eye moment.
Enjoying this so much. (And this really makes me wish Hollis was still on the show).

miss_porcupine March 21 2009, 19:56:48 UTC

I think Abby would've just done a double-take and asked Ziva if she'd seen that. And Ziva would've said it was a trick of the light.

Thank you. :)

fureux March 21 2009, 19:50:53 UTC

snaked! no way. dude, this keeps getting better and better with every post. what a fab sandbox you've created.

miss_porcupine March 21 2009, 19:57:14 UTC

Thanks. Now if I can only wrap this up in a suitable style...

ga_unicorn March 21 2009, 20:02:00 UTC

I am having to carefully restrain myself to keep from flailing my arms in frustration. Geez, there is a reason I don't read WIPs until they're finished! Eagerly awaiting the next episode.

miss_porcupine March 21 2009, 20:08:39 UTC

Err, sorry? :)

bratfarrar March 21 2009, 20:05:56 UTC

Aaaahhhh. Every time I think things might be possibly drawing to a close, you ratchet things up a notch.

miss_porcupine March 21 2009, 20:09:13 UTC

I hopefully am one part shy of done, so does that qualify as drawing to a close? :)

Thanks.

bratfarrar March 23 2009, 11:35:25 UTC

Yes--and now I'm torn between being excited about finding out (maybe) what exactly had been going on and being sad that it'll be over.

Which is a sign of good storytelling, I think.

angelofmercy March 21 2009, 20:34:45 UTC

It feels like everything is starting to come together and then hopefully the boys will never see Gibbs and his team again...except for in the sequel, right? ;p

And I'm sure Lorne will have to do something to save Sheppard or something else will come up soon enough that he and his team will be back out of the doghouse.

Can't wait to see what happens next :)

angelofmercy March 21 2009, 21:16:03 UTC

Just a few more thoughts that didn't occur to me on the first read through - It doesn't seem like Lorne's team trusts his buddy - how much do they know? Is his buddy prone to wondering around like O'Neill's buddy was? Also, what would Ducky think about Lorne?

miss_porcupine March 21 2009, 21:38:21 UTC

The advantage of sticking to one POV is that a lot gets left for speculation until afterward. ;)